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W-Wha, wait, Jason Todd?! As in the, I believe second person to bare the mantle of Robin. That Jason Todd?
7087502 Sorry to disappoint you but not that Jason Todd.
not a bad start, it sure has piquet my interest.
7097085 Glad to know that you are interested in the story.
7098990 welcome and I do expect great things.
7099156 I hope not to disappoint. For I shall give my best, along with my editor.
7099415 that is all we, your adoring fans, ask of you.
cliff-hangers are good, just don't over use them, and great 2nd chapter.
7114733 You got a deal.
Oh, I don't know, maybe, you know, take it to the pony with powerful magic and likes to research?
Take the pills to Twilight.
TWILIGHT!!
7114818 great.
The next time her roommate sees Octavia should be very interesting. Hell, when she steps out of that house, things should be very interesting.
Okay, what in Tartarus is going on here??
K ARE THESE GUYS??!!
Octavia couldn't wait to tell Jason how she felt, yet when she sees him again she acts like the sex was no big deal??
WHO THE F
That just about made me want to stop reading this story altogether. However, I'll give it one more chapter to see what the hell is going on.
7151603 SO I hope you will be satisfied with the next chapter to answer all your questions.
I will stop doing these things from now on.
I should have known that writing OC's was a dangerous game to do here or in any other place.
7151627 OCs aren't the reason I'm upset. I like OC when interesting characteristics. I'm upset at the fact that Octavia couldn't wait to tell Jason how she felt, yet basically gave him the cold shoulder when she saw he next. Jason had issues with being with ponies, has the night of his life with one, thinks about wanting to pursue a relationship, and gets his hopes crushed when he next saw her.
7151725 Octavia was replaced by a copy/clone okay I got it from when they were at the tree and the portal opend up.
7154708 How did you come up with that because of the portal??
7154866 there was another mare that was coming out of it that 'looked' like her, said that she basically was the same color palette as Octavia, but probably needed a little bit of time for the palette to set. think 'Invasion of the Body-Snatchers' kind of thing.
7155167 Where did you read any pony coming out of the portal?
A head poked out. Nothing was said about any pony stepping out. Plus, the head was beige not grey.
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Guys Please don't fight because of my mistake here I promise that everything will be answered in the next chapter.
I am truly sorry for making this lame excuse of chapter and I will swear by my writing hand that I will never happen again.
7155245 it is a great chapter and we're not fighting,( I would never want to fight anyone here).
7155211 like I said it took a little bit of time for the palette to set, spell or enchantment to get it right, and there is no proof that it's not a copy/clone.
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7155259 *sigh*
Fair enough. I'll wait until the next chapter to see what happens.
I just read the first half of this story...I'm done. I don't care what these assholes are trying to do, you don't fuck with someone's emotions like that. I'm sorry, I can't read anymore.
7173510 welp, at least you read it this far and I am truly greatful for it for your time.
If there was an opinion you wanted to tell me of thus story can you please tell me.
(In PM please)
I actually find this story quite interesting and would be happy if you continued it. The experiments are getting really fun to see the different things that he can do to the ponies.
Keep up the good work. 
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Do not worry as long as there is one person in this site that likes the story and wishes for it to continue then It shall be done.
I have to say, I just lost it when I saw big mac enter the kitchen xD I knew right then and there that Apple Jack would give him the pill and not take it herself lol. Keep up the good work!~ Really enjoying the story~
Zoophilia? Why not just stick to using the word bestiality? They both mean the same thing and more people recognize the word “bestiality” anyways.
Also, it’s too bad he only thinks of the ponies as ‘Just talking animals’ and not people. Otherwise his thoughts would be considered that of “Xenophilia” instead of zoophilia.
7087887 Does he at least look like him?
7553956 Technically yes, but with a different attitude.
That guy is an idiot.
7703034 Certainly, he is.
7087502 Its a little sad that he is not the same. Here's a small price(even if its a year late):
8195367 I can't put a violent man in a place of Friendship and singing ponies, That would ruin the whole plot and harmony for everyone.
A really good story, plenty desciptions and well made Imagination and wish realization.
What made me unappreciating this is the morality being discarded completly and a mad Scientist playing God. Nothing against this in particular but completly controlling someone like that? Memory transplant? Dulling emotions? Dont you feel Bad? Its not 1930 in Germany anymore....
Empathy is completly overlooked.
PM me about this because before I read anymore I Need to know the why... Fetish play?Complete control? What is your angle here?