James; an artist and computer whiz has his life turned upside-down when Rainbow Dash appears on Earth in his house. But she is from a fictional cartoon he enjoys; My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, how did she get here and will they beome friends or will they become foes.
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I like where it is going. Could use a little help with the punctuation and SOME grammar, but overall, I give it a 8/10 for effort.
I liked it....But it could have had longer chapters and more description.
But overall...very good
best ending ever
good job
Pretty good.
Felt pretty rushed, but still good.
Oh... Oh no...
750479 Something wrong with it?
747695 Thanks, I try my best in writing fanficitons
749061 I know where you're coming from, there's a sequel to tie into this story as well
747929 Yeah, I would have had more description in it. It is my first fanfic though...
First
DAFAQ? okay, I have nothing to say.
Second!