After making the decision of a lifetime, James now resides in Equestria as a pegasus, now called Lightning Bolt. He must adapt to his new life and doesn't know that decisions lead to disaster sometimes, also certain changelings get involved...
After making the decision of a lifetime, James now resides in Equestria as a pegasus, now called Lightning Bolt. He must adapt to his new life and doesn't know that decisions lead to disaster sometimes, also certain changelings get involved...
I almost feel bad for you. You've written over 11k words and no one is going to be real interested in reading it. Despite your efforts, OC/self-inserts are not usually the pull for a reader. I mean, the whole reason we write and read fan-fiction is to experience the show in a new light.
Best of luck to ya!
I might as well read this. I'll edit this and let you know what I think.
747601 It isn't a self-insert of OC of myself, this is James, a character I made up that has nothing to do with myself
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Yes, I pointed out whether it's an OC or a self-insert as indicated by the /