• Member Since 20th Jun, 2012
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Corvus Eclipse


Not much to talk about. My name is Tom and I am 25. Nice to meet you ^^

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In ancient times the land was once laid in forests. Ages ago mythical beings of great size inhabited and ruled over it. Back then, those beings lived peacefully with the slowly emerging pony race. But as time passed by, the pony race started to expand over the land.

Many forests have been destroyed in the process of this expansion. This act enraged the mythical creatures and friendship was replaced by hostility.

To end the hostility Princess Celestia created a great wall that seperated the "Undiscovered West" from Equestria. It all happened before the banishment of her sister Princess Luna.

But after a millenium of peaceful silence... a message reaches Canterlot about a crack in the wall. The curiosity of the small filly called Fray Leaf will lead her into the "Unexplored West" where she will meet a most unusual friend.

English is not my main language ^^ Which is why I kindly ask for forgivness if you find any mistakes in the text :)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 12 )

For English being your second language, you have better grammar then most born-English speakers!

Hmmmmmm... intriguing. If the cover art is anything to go by, these "beasts" look formidable. And maybe it's just me, but it also reminds me of a creature from final fantasy.

This story piqued my interest.

:twilightsmile:

Why is chapter one being reposted so many times?

7150162 I am updating it. Found a few things that did not play along with future content so I corrected them.

7149691 Glad to hear it ^^ I will try not to dissapoint with future chapters. Can't promise to upload a new chapter on regular base though ._.

Oh! Your the first to write about the Undiscovered West. Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

7150313
No need to rush, just knowing your making the next one is good enough for me!

7150857 Yeah I inspected the official map of Equestria and used its information for this story :)

7152020 Sweet! I can't wait to see more :pinkiehappy:

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