Not much to talk about. My name is Tom and I am 25. Nice to meet you ^^
Deep beneath the surface of Equestria an unknown creature dwells within the darkness of the Underground; guarding the long forgotten Chamber of Stone and the secrets hidden within. A mighty earthquake disturbed the peace in the endless tunnels of this dark place and changed the fate of the creature forever.
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I have changed the size of the text blocks. I hope this will prevent the people from running away
Man, you did an amazing job. The grammar could be better, but the story is very, very interesting. I love it, I want it, make more!
God dammit! Another story I am addicted to.
Also, Ember is a girl name. So... he is a girl? :D
Sorry for the grammar xd To be honest it is my very first story I have ever written in english. That is why pls do not expect any miracles
Back to your question....
Yeah I had it in mind that Ember might sound like a girl name XD But I do know girls that have the name Sam... that is why I thought it would work out. I was trying to create a name that would go along with his eyes; I thought Emberflame would be his name but in the end I decided to simply call him Ember.
The new pic I have put on should help you a littel bit to imagine how Ember looks like with his eyes closed.
He has a nice... face. I guess...
Great chapter
I see you fixed some of the grammar errors I wrote.
Amazing chapter!
Thank you that you took the time to mention those errors. Stupid fast writing fingers
:P
Also did you draw that picture of Emberflame by yourself?
Nah I found it somewhere on the net. I did few changes on it though so it can help the readers to imagine the faceless fiend
He looks... nice. Anyway, can't wait for MOAAAAAAAAAAR! *Ehm* Also you have a unique way of writing conversations. I asume using "-" is a german way of writing dilagues? I have seen quite a few ways of writing dialogues, for example:
"talking" - American
'talking' - British
„talking“ - Czech
-talking. - German?
I would not call it the german way of writing dialogues xD I have to admit that in many german or polish books I have read ''-'' have been used for the dialogues. That is why I keep using it I assume
By the way the pic I have found seems to be from the game called Shadow of the Colossus.
Heh. The first time you described him I (for some reason) imagined him as Dahaka from Prince of Persia: Warrior Within.
Oh how I hated to run away from that bastard xd
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Yes. I played it as a kid, and I was sooooooo f*cking scared when he appeared. Which reminds me I have yet to play Two Thrones to finish the storyline of Sand of Time. I totally forgot about that. God dammit! OR better, I am gonna have to replay it all, from the PoP:SoT to PoP:TT.
Great chapter
Shit is about to get real, my dear fellow readers, shit is about to get real...
Anyway, great chapter. God, did you win any competitions in fast-writing on computer keyboard? Because I swear you would win every-damn-time.
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Beer and ponies go along pretty well I would say xD
My first 200 views in total
yay
Good for you, buddy
This fic deserves it!
♫Love is in the air,
Everywhere I look around,
Love is in the air,
Every sight and every sound♫
826378 ♫ And I don't know if I'm being foolish
Don't know if I'm being wise
But it's something that I must believe in
And it's there when I look in your eyes. ♫
Dun dun duuuuuun
Cliff hanger
Wow... just wow
829402 I am glad to see that you like it
i've had just about enough of these f***ing cliffhangers!
i.imgur.com/PQESi.jpg
More, please...
I was very bussy lately.
I am already working on a new chapter but I simply require more time to end it. With any luck the story should be ready tomorrow. 
Sry that it took so long... I have been really bussy. I hope you will enjoy it!
One of the best stories EVER!!!
For your first story this is really, really, really great.
Also: I can't wait for the next part, if it is just as awesome as this, then you already earned yourself a favorite from me
863316 I am glad to hear it ^^
865325 I will try to do my best. I really enjoyed writing that story: I do not care if it will be popular or not... the thing that counts for me are the readers that enjoy my work.
You can't imagine how long I have been waiting for something like this. Thank thee O Master of writing.
And for Ember:
arch.413chan.net/let_the_friendship_flow_through_you-%28n1310047967035%29.jpg
867633 Hehe I am sure Ember would gladly let the Friendship flow through him
Again sry that it took so long: studies and etc 
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F*ucking 18000+ words in few days and it "took too long"? What? WHAT?!?!?! -error: rational-thinking.exe has been terminated-
HRAmwona\sogtnasel,gnbaefynsrgnlhnlsrvhnlrnlhdfjkfcjhkdfgthsozhosrhngsoynhlohnkns\dfhjjkfzzerythegboatdotnet.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/mind-blown1.gif?w=479 *Mind-f*cking-blown*
867665 Mindblowing isn't it?
933116 I appreciate comments like it because mostly those errors happen due fast writing. I simply do not have the time to check everything properly xD