• Member Since 13th Jan, 2016
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That_Delusional_Pegasus


A wanderer who comes and goes. Not even I know where I'll be next.

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Hearts and Hooves day is a day of love and chocolate. treats. Vinyl hasn't had a Hearts and Hooves day with a special somepony, though, so she has the rest of the day to figure something out.

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Understandable errors, otherwise cute story. Keep it up! :derpytongue2:

6945089 Understandable as in physics or actual grammar errors? The physics errors are there because I put them there. The characters also refer to the physics mistakes after they happen.

6945166 Do you mind pointing them out? I'm kinda REALLY lazy.

6945233 some pony tarted yelling should be started, and derpy was talking to vinyl she said, nice day octavia what you get for scratch im pretty sure shes talking to vinyl not octavia. Not sure if you meant for that to happen but you did a good job, basically like two errors!

6945363 Derpy said the right thing. It's Derpy, what do you expect? :derpytongue2:

And I'll go change that mistake now. Thanks for pointing it out.

6945930 k cool, hope i wasnt being an ass. :ajsmug:

6948970 Don't worry. To me, you were actually quite helpful! :twilightsmile:

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