The universe exploded and then the Doctor fixed it, at the cost of never existing. Now the Doctor finds himself in the TARDIS as it crashes through the fabric of the universe. Once it has landed the Doctor can't believe the scanners when they say he is on his home planet. But all is not as it seems when he opens the door to find a brown pony with an egg timer on its flank.
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Go on
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2 Doctors,2 Doctors,2 Doctors,2 Doctors2 Doctors,2 Doctors
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By the way please continue!
Very intriguing. Of course the two Doctors meeting is something that's been done before, but go on! You've captured my interest! Not bad for your first fic! Although I will say I found a few grammar mistakes in your story. And some things were written, a bit odd, like in this passage:
What you said: "I must of hit my head thought the Doctor." The correct way to say it is replace the word "of" with "have".
You also wrote "foul best" at one point when I think you meant "foul beast". The mistakes piss off the grammar nazi in me, but don't make this story unreadable. Also, shouldn't Dr. Whooves figure out that the Doctor is a timelord by his use of the word TARDIS?
But my lame complaints aside, I like where you're going with this! Liked and faved.
And, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you maybe read my fanfics and leave some feedback on them? I could use all the help I can get. Thanks!
Stay frosty my delicious friends. Silver, out! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Nice, I will give this story my thumbs.
The Doctor Who fan and the MLP fan in me exploded from joy.
I WANT MOAR.
I read it with a British accent. So you must continue.
good job man loving it all ready :3 i'll read last chapter after school
love it! /) (\
make more please??? ^^
I didn't expect this kind of response. All I can say is thank you for taking the time to read this and for your words of encouragement. The next chapter will be longer than the others and should be out before the weekend.
Well looks like I'm third, yay now i can fianlly do this
I HOLD THE GREAT PEICE OF CRAP ON A STICK KNOW AS THIRD!!!!
(rasies peice of crap over head)
I HAVE THE POWER!!!
(crap slides of and falls on face)
Great story though
very nice sir.
hope the next 2 chapters are this good
i must say this is a very well developed story sir.
I hope that you continue this
i am loving how well this is both thought out and portrayed.
Good job.
This chapter was going to be longer but work and school have got in the way so I decided to chop it in half and finish the rest this weekend. Also I'm looking for an editor as my time is a bit limited and grammar and punctuation aren't my strong points.
789393 well i can't wait for the next chapter i really can't and i guess i could help you in some way...
Correct me if i am wrong, but according to what I have heard, the doctor has two hearts. Therefore, unless Whooves only has one, both of them should be beating quickly.
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Judging by the age (209) This Doctor would be in his First incarnation Thus would only have one heart.
Ah. Alien biology. Have to love it.
And the tension rises.
I will be your editor if it means hurrying up with the story!
Speed is of the essence! And quality. Quality is good too.
fairly nice way to keep us interested and doing it subtly.
So far i would rate this 4.5 out of 5.
If you need an editor you can tell me and i will be happy to oblige.
Good work, keep it up!
few mistakes here they are : at the orange. sky. / i'm sure it should be / at the orange sky.
and : You and your mean / its spelt / You and your men
There ya go :D
Thank you dbanksischillin for editing.
We reached the end of a chapter and no one is unconscious? What's going on?
anytime Landpower
Somewhat short chapter. The Doctor needs to get his shit in gear, these damn Time Ponies are wasting to much valuable Doctoring time.
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Yeah sorry about the chapter lengths but I've been super busy lately. I begin my holidays this week so the chapters will be longer from now on.
Finally, a fanfic that involves any Doctor that isn't 10.
YOU sir, have quite the talent for writing Doctor Who stories. You have officially written 7 chapters without a single error concerning the Doctor's story and his niggly, naggly, quirks. Hell, I wonder if Matt Smith would be impressed! I know for a fact that if this was an episode, I would totally watch this!
ALLONS-Y!!!
This story is almost at a end but I have to say that this was a complete joy to write. I feel like I could continue this into kind of like a series with 10 different episodes. I have other projects I want to work on though so I would want to know if anyone would want me to continue with my series idea.
From here? Yes, I would. I think there are too many loose threads otherwise.
You should definately make it into a series!
Pretty short chapter to finish the first episode but I felt it was enough. This first episode was meant to introduce the characters and I think I've done that to lay the way for much fun next episodes. I don't know how long till the next chapters come out as I really only have some vague plans for where the episodes will be set.
i agree also make this into a series that doctor fans everywhere can be proud of
Oh shit this is epic.
My jaw literarily physically dropped when I read that the daleks were peaceful.
"Looking nervous Romana looked nervously at the Doctor before looking at the door."
That's sure a lot of looking nervous.
This chapter has a great deal of run-on sentences. They make it hard to grasp what is happening. You should try breaking them up with commas or semi colons so readers can understand the course of events.
Again, run-on sentences are less than coherent. Aside from grammar, I am looking forward to reading the next episodes!
Is anyone interested in making a cover image for The Doctor and Whooves? Just asking because my one is pretty average and I'd like a custom one. PM if you're interested.
i could refer you too an artist he might be able to help
if this were spread out a bit longer, this part would have a real doctor whoish episode feel to it. good job, cant wait for the monster.
Moon moved over too the front door and pushed a button next to it.
“Best not to keep boss waiting, she can have a mean temper if he’s kept waiting.”
EDIT1: In-fact a lot of places you have used too (As in I'll come too!) instead of to (I am going to the space station)