Origins of Madness

The Life stream guides every Pony in Equestria, bringing peace and Harmony with it. But what happens to those, who are not connected to this Energy?

This is the Story of Life Dreamer, a Pony who searches for Love and Friendship, only to find Disharmony and Chaos...

Chapters (4)

Prologue · 4th Dec 2012 · 2,043 words
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Chapter 1 - To start a new life... again · 10th Jul 2012 · 2,765 words
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Chapter 2 - Not in Jail?! · 10th Jul 2012 · 1,578 words
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Chapter 3 - The King, the Demon and a Planet full of life · 11th Jul 2012 · 4,549 words
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TheRoboticFist

TheRoboticFist #1 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · Prologue ·

Alright i edited the LARGE mistake you made about Cloud Chaser and everything else. Otherwise its a really good story :D
I just can't wait for more!

csabijoo

csabijoo #2 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · Prologue ·

good ina a way

abandoned2123

abandoned2123 #3 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · Prologue ·

This was good, but I honestly think that this prologue alone would be even more powerful if you were to chop it up and expand it by two or so chapters. Even so, this is a really riveting concept. Good work.

Twi

Twi #4 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · Prologue ·

727164 Yeah, i thought about doing that too, but I want to use most of the addressed incidents in later Chapters (what happened after the Orphanage, how his parents passed away and so on...)

But thank you anyway for reading this Fic

Chapter 1 will be up in a few hours.

Edit: Chapter is finished, waiting for the editing to be done :)

TheRoboticFist

TheRoboticFist #5 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - To start a new life... again ·

Amazing, Well this day went horribly wrong for a second i thought that he was going to get a date untill the gasp part from Clearly Oblivia

JeremyPunk

JeremyPunk #6 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - To start a new life... again ·

Wow........That's just...........What the hell equestria........seriously...........he accidentally bumps into one of the princesses and they're like "HOLY CRAP, HERPDY DERP! HE IS. DERP. ATTACKING THE PRINCESS! HERP DERP!

Twi

Twi #7 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - To start a new life... again ·

731987 better be safe, than sorry
Or do you want to take the risk of getting one of the princesses killed by somepony that is already considered a monster?

JeremyPunk

JeremyPunk #8 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - To start a new life... again ·

That's what I'm talking about. Just because of what he did in the past and what might happen in the future, they're being judgy-mc-judgy pants. I mean, didn't they hear him sputtering out that apology?