Warzone Caesaria: The Mare Broken, Part 1
“Lord Markos,” Mattias replied evenly. “I thought you had returned to Ultramar.”
“Other matters came up, and I felt that my skills were needed elsewhere.” Markos had yet to drop his smile, though Mattias noted that his eye had briefly drifted towards Tara before turning back to him. He also noted that some of the regular Guardsmen had moved around behind his entourage, almost fully encircling them.
Tread carefully; it may be the last thing we do.
“And so you end up here,” Mattias said. “I did not know that the soldiers of Caesaria were battling heretics along with Greenskins.”
“Of course, you would be blind to the transgressions that have taken place here.” Markos’ smile vanished as he continued. “Mattias Velas, you stand accused of conspiracy against the Holy Ordos, of treason against the High Lords of Terra and the Imperium, of harboring unsanctioned witches with intent to transport to Terra, and of heresy against the God Emperor of Mankind.” Behind him, Mattias could hear Alexis and Nikolai switching the safeties off their hellguns, followed by Tara giving a little gasp.
“Why would you say something like that?” Tara asked. “Mattias has only ever tried to help others-”
“Silence, witch!” Markos barked, causing Tara to take a small step back. “You are just as guilty as the man who stands before me, but do not think you may speak in his defense.”
“It’s okay, Tara,” Mattias said. “I can handle this.” Tara said nothing, stepping back again as she fixed Markos with a glare. “So, you abandon your post and rush into the middle of a warzone just so you can accuse me of treason. I would think that your time in the Inquisition would have taught you patience.”
“You think of this as impatience?” Markos scoffed. “What would you have me do? Accuse you in the middle of the Imperial Palace, where the gullible and corrupt would be readily available to defend your case?”
“Gullible?” Mattias asked before the realization dawned on him. “You still think-”
“Come now, young Mattias; any sane man would realize that the Emperor would never reincarnate as a woman. I tried warning you many times, yet you persisted in bringing an undocumented psyker into the Hall of the High Lords, and then deceived many in passing her off as the Emperor Reborn. If there is a more blatant show of heresy, I have not discovered it.”
“You’re delusional, Markos.” Mattias countered. “You were there when She revealed Herself; you saw the visions that She imparted upon the assembly.”
“Any psyker can impart visions on another,” Markos looked towards Angelique. “You have traveled with one for so long; perhaps the close proximity to the witch has deluded your perception of what is real and what is not.”
“The eye stands before the mare, though he cannot stop her from being broken.” Angelique said, looking down to kick at a small rock near her shoe.
“I know enough about psychic illusions to know when my mind is being tricked, Markos,” Mattias said. “This... this was something different. This actually felt real compared to any illusion.”
“Regardless,” Markos looked back towards Mattias. “Turn over your weapons peacefully, and I can assure you that your eventual execution will be painless.”
“If you are going to accuse me of heresy, why not just shoot me down now?” Mattias asked. “You outnumber us, you appear to have the Guard on your side; shoot us now and be done with it.”
“Ha! Had you not already planted your minion in a position of power, then you would have died much sooner.” Markos’ smile returned again. “I know that the ‘Empress’ plans to land in the southern half of the city. I will take you there where you will confess to your crimes, after which you will watch me execute the impostor before I kill you.” Mattias stopped for a moment, looking towards the men that currently held him at gunpoint.
“You are delusional, Markos.” he repeated.
“Delusional?” Markos started, his anger growing. “Delusional!? My mind is far clearer than any man’s, my soul more pure than the greatest shrine worlds. I am a loyal servant of the Emperor and Mankind, and I will not tolerate a traitor like you doubting my authority!”
“Would you please stop!” Tara shouted, Mattias taken aback by the sudden burst of anger from the young woman as she stepped towards Markos. “Why are you doing this? Don’t you realize that there are thousands of people in danger who need our help.”
“Stay out of this, witch.” Markos replied, his eye narrowing again.
“No, I won’t! All you care about is proving that you’re right; you don’t actually care about any of the people that are trying to do good in this universe.” Tara’s hands tightened into fists as she continued. “So what if you don’t think that Mattias told the truth. Does it really matter now?”
“Tara, it matters a lot more than you think-” Mattias started, but Tara would not be stopped.
“I have tried my best to understand how you people operate, and quite frankly this goes against everything that I’ve come to learn. Humanity is supposed to be united against the monsters that want to destroy it, but you care for your grudges far beyond what a sane person would. ‘So what if hundreds are killed and forgotten, just so long as I’m right!’ Is that really how you want to live your life? You’re a champion of humanity; you should show those that cannot defend themselves that they are being protected, not that their heroes are at each other’s throats. Maybe if you all actually trusted one another for once in your life, maybe you could actually stand a chance at succeeding in something-”
“I said stay out of this!” Mattias’ pistol was in his hand before Markos’ strike was finished. Tara crumpled to her knees, her hands flying to her face to cover her now split lip. Markos drew his own pistol, aiming the weapon directly at Tara’s head.
“Well, ‘Inquisitor’ Velas?” Markos asked. “Are you willing to cooperate now?”
“Let Tara go, and we can solve this like true men.” Mattias growled. “Starting with me sending your soul to hell where it belongs.”
“I will not give such luxuries to traitors.” Markos pressed the barrel into Tara’s scalp, the girl whimpering as metal brushed against her skin. “Hand over your weapons, Velas, or I will end this witch’s life.”
“I have a clear shot at the traitor, my lord,” Nikolai said. “I can disarm him before he can get a shot off.”
“I am growing impatient, Velas!” Markos’ finger tightened around the trigger of his pistol. “Turn over your weapons, or the girl dies.” Mattias aimed his bolt pistol directly at Markos’ head. He would get one shot, but the Hellfire rounds would make short work of the traitor and would cause him to drop his pistol before he could shoot Tara. It was a risky course of action, but the best possible one to protect the girl from harm.
Mattias stopped when he felt a hand on his shoulder. “The axe is raised,” Angelique said, giving Mattias a small smile. “Rise up only when the mare has been broken.” Mattias’ jaw tightened as he looked from Angelique to Tara. The girl still had her back to him, holding as still as possible to avoid drawing more of Markos’ attention. Now would be the perfect time to attack and end it all, and from where she sat Tara would avoid the worst of the fighting.
Perhaps... Damn.
“Alexis, Nikolai,” Mattias said after a lengthy pause. “Stand down.”
“What?” Alexis asked. “But my lord-”
“Stand down,” Mattias repeated. “We’re outnumbered, and Tara is in the line of fire; even if we do manage to win, there is a chance she might be hurt in the exchange.” Not entirely true, but Mattias was no longer willing to trust luck. “Stand down, now.”
There was another pause, followed by the sound of Nikolai and Alexis switching their safeties back on. Mattias lowered his pistol, to which Markos smiled. “It is good to know that even traitors can realize when they are in the presence of their betters. Sergeant, collect their weapons.” One of the stormtroopers stepped forward, taking Mattias’ pistol and sword as two others removed Alexis and Nikolai’s hellguns. Mattias moved to help Tara, but was cut off by two other stormtroopers.
“The girl stays with me,” Markos said, roughly pulling Tara upon her feet while still keeping his pistol trained on her head. “A little assurance that you will not conspire further against me.”
“M-Mattias...” Tara stammered, falling silent again as Markos rested the bolt pistol against her neck.
“If you know what’s good for you, witch,” Markos hissed. “You will remain silent until you are given time to confess.”
“You will burn for this, Markos.” Mattias growled. At this, Markos merely sneered.
“Only the heretic can accuse the righteous of wrongdoing. Now come; your judgement awaits.”
...
“Judith, help bring those autocannons up!” Naomi called, turning away from the supply Chimera the Sisters had been working to load.
“Will she be needing any help, Sister?” the sergeant assisting them asked. Anything to further the discussion died as they watched Judith carrying two of the heavy guns as easily as a child would carry a pile of sticks, her heavy flamer still slung over her back.
“Judith has been blessed by the Empress in many ways, friend.” Naomi replied, stepping aside as the Sister gently placed the autocannons into the Chimera.
“Err... yes.” the man nodded before regaining his composure. “I thank you for your assistance, Sister; moving these supplies would have taken much longer had you and your fellows not been here to assist.”
“Do not thank us,” Ruth piped up. “This is based on the blessed plan of the Empress’ Chosen Student.”
“The Empress’ Student?” the man asked, confused. “Was she that young woman that kept showing up in those vidclips of Her Majesty?”
“Her name’s Tara,” Judith added. “Sweetest thing, but she seems a bit sheltered. Can’t swing a sword to save her life, but she will come around in time.”
“Judith,” Naomi started, but the Guardsman interrupted.
“No, it’s alright.” the man started. “It’s actually... comforting in a way. To know that even though the Empress expects greatness from all of us, She searches for it in the most humble of places; reminds me of the stories my grandfather used to tell me.” The pious Sister within Naomi had thought of a reply, that the Empress’ greatness and power was far beyond that of most mortals. It would be a perfect reflection of all she had been taught as part of the Order... but from her experience watching over Tara, perhaps there was more truth to the old stories than the bombastic sermons of the Ecclesiarchy.
“We are finished up here, Sister Naomi,” Veronica called, she and Rebecca coming around the left side of the Chimera.
“Good. I suppose we should either move on to the next supply depot or return and reconvene with Lady Tara.” Naomi looked towards the sergeant. “Is there anything more you require from us?”
“No, my lady. Thank you once more for your help.” the sergeant turned back to his men, rattling off a series of orders as Naomi’s Sisters formed up.
“Perhaps we should report back to Lady Tara,” Ruth started. “She would be pleased to know her planning has been successful.”
“I suppose that is the best course of action,” Naomi replied. “... and it would be nice to see the young Inquisitor working as well.”
“You still don’t like him, Sister Naomi?” Veronica asked as they started back towards the command tent. “I admit, he is not the most forthcoming about some issues, but he is not wholly unpleasant.”
“He is not, but the Inquisition has always had their share of secrets and lies that I cannot say I have been fond of over the course of my life.” a pause. “Still, Lady Tara trusts him, and I trust her judgment in this regard.”
“Do you think she trusts that Valhallan that’s always looking at her?” Judith asked, causing Naomi to grimace beneath her helmet.
“By the Empress, I hope not. The last thing I want to think about is that man lusting after the Chosen Student.”
“What if it was the Inquisitor?”
“I suppose I would have reasonable grounds to charge him with heresy.” this drew a short chuckle from Judith and Rebecca, but to Naomi’s pleasure they did not press on the matter. Sisters of Battle were forbidden to have any love beyond the love for the Empress; why in Her Name would they think they could obsess over the love between others?
“Sister Naomi, is that Inquisitor Markos?” Veronica asked, stopping and pointing towards the south. The Inquisitor of the Ordo Hereticus was easy to spot; his red armor and robes stood out against the olive drab of the Guardsmen. He appeared to be speaking with an officer, perhaps that major the Guardsmen had spoken to, and the Stormtroopers around them had-
“Lady Tara?” Naomi gasped. “He has Lady Tara at gunpoint?!” Confusion switched quickly to rage. “Double time, Sisters! We must defend the Empress’ Chosen!” It was no surprise that Ruth pulled ahead of the others, but the rest of the Sisters managed to keep good pace as they charged towards the Inquisitor. The man did not see then, instead calmly stepping into the back of one of two nearby Chimeras, the hatch closing shut as the vehicles began to pull away from the camp.
With a growl, Ruth raised her bolter to her shoulder, her finger twitching to let off a three shot burst. The shells sparked against the armor of the Chimera, leaving noticeable scars along the metal while the Guardsmen in the camp ducked away to avoid crossfire. “Ruth! Hold your fire!” Naomi called.
“But that bastard kidnapped Lady Tara!” Ruth protested.
“And how is firing your bolter into the air supposed to solve things? Assess the situation first, then we can act properly.” Ruth hesitated, her bolter trembling in her hands as Naomi turned back to the rest of the camp. Most of the Guardsmen were content to avoid aggravating the Sisters further, though the officer that Lord Markos had been speaking to did not appear to be among them. The man was a short, stuffy type, appearing far too “clean” to be a typical frontline Guardsman.
“What’s going on here?” he asked. “Who are you, and why are you firing weapons inside my camp?”
“I am Sister Naomi of the Order of Our Martyred Lady,” Naomi began. “Our charge, the Empress’ Personal Student, appears to have been taken from us by a rogue Inquisitor; I request that you release a vehicle to me and my Sisters that we may try and rescue the lady.”
“I cannot just release vehicles to anyone who requests access, even if they are Sororitas such as yourself.” Naomi furrowed her brow at this as the man continued. “Besides, the matter has already been taken care of, and the rogue Inquisitor will no longer be a threat to anyone.”
“No longer...?” Ruth repeated as she came up next to Naomi. “He has stolen the Empress’ Chosen Student, and you think that he is ‘no longer a threat’?!”
“Of course. Lord Inquisitor Markos explained it all to me. You should be thankful that the traitors have been dealt with before they could-” the officer never finished before Ruth broke his jaw with the back of her bolter.
“Traitor?!” She screamed, leaping on top of the man before driving her fist into his face. “You would dare call the Empress’ Student a traitor?! She has done far more for the Imperium that you could possibly imagine, coward! Turncoat! Heretic!” Veronica and Rebecca darted forward to pry Ruth off the officer before she beat him to death, while Judith unslung her heavy flamer as some of the Guardsmen renewed their courage and stepped forward to restrain the Sisters.
“Ruth, that’s enough!” Naomi pried Ruth off the bleeding man, standing her up before giving her a quick slap. “The man is a traitor, but beating him to death does not get us any closer to freeing Lady Tara. Calm your mind and focus your rage instead of letting it run wild like some heretic berserker.”
“But he... he...”
“Did you not hear what I just said? By the Empress, do I need to get your hearing checked too?” Ruth said nothing, though she appeared to be calming down as Naomi continued. “We will find Lady Tara, Sister, even if we have to pursue her on foot. But I need you focused on your duty, and not drowning the world with righteous zeal... not yet.”
“... I’ll try.” Ruth gave a weak nod. Naomi would have said more, but it appeared that the confrontation had attracted more attention, this time in the form of a taller officer in a blue greatcoat.
“What’s going on?” he asked. “Pardon, Sister, but why does my major look like he was hit by a Leman Russ?”
“I suppose you are the commander of this division?” Naomi asked.
“Well, yes,” the man replied. “But that does not really answer my question-”
“You should know that your man here turned over the Empress’ Student to a rogue Inquisitor, who who believes that she and her fellows are traitors of the highest order.” the officer seemed to grow pale at this, stepping back slightly as he regarded the injured man.
“I-is this true?” he asked. The major could not speak for himself, but some of the other soldiers gave quick nods of affirmation. The officer’s worry quickly shifted towards anger. “Dammit, I spend a goodly fortune proving that this isn’t some hoax, and this is how you repay me?! I’d haul you to the Commissars myself if matters were not so urgent right now.”
“I am certain you will handle his punishment properly, but my Sisters and I need to catch up with the traitor before he can bring further harm to the Student and her companions.” there was a pause as the officer’s expression shifted again.
“I can provide you a transport of some kind,” he started. “But I cannot spare men for a full rescue mission; the Greenskins have started a major assault from the north and south, and we must redeploy to make sure that the aliens are contained. You’ll have to save her on your own.”
“... We have faced more challenging missions,” Naomi replied. “Do what you can, and may the Empress guide your path.” The officer nodded, turning back towards the command tent while two other Guardsmen helped the injured major back to his feet. Naomi turned back to her Sisters before speaking.
“They could not have gotten very far.” she said. “We should be able to catch Markos before the ork attack can possibly reach their position.” the Sisters nodded, though Ruth’s scowl had returned once more. “Is there something that you wish to say, Ruth?”
“... Nothing more, Sister Naomi,” she started. “Perhaps I acted a bit rashly, but understand that I would die before I would see Lady Tara injured.”
“I’m sure we all would, Ruth.” Naomi replied. “I’m sure we would...”
...
Twilight’s lip ached, but otherwise had stopped bleeding. Not that it gave her much comfort, with her hands chained behind her back while she remained surrounded by Markos and his men. Mattias and the others had been put in another vehicle, and she remained uncertain of they were still even following Markos’ group at this point. As if to add insult to injury, Markos had taken Twilight’s sword, the weapon dangling from his waist as if to taunt Twilight as to how hopeless she was.
Once more, Twilight was cut off and alone.
“You don’t have to do this...” she mumbled, speaking only to cut the silence within the vehicle.
“What does it take to get you to stay quiet?” Markos asked. “I should have had you gagged before bringing you here; at least it would keep you from trying to sway me from my righteous cause.”
“Creating division among people is ‘righteous’? If you would only speak to the Empress about your concerns-”
“Your ‘Empress’ is a liar who has deceived far too many, but the Imperium will be saved from Mattias’ delusions.” Markos looked towards Twilight. “This is not the first time some heretic has come forth claiming to be the Emperor Reborn. The last one I believe was killed by the Inquisition sometime in the 41st Millennium, though with the Emperor’s Ascension shortly thereafter I imagine that some data may have been lost.”
Markos was using circular logic again. Twilight might not have been able to fight him physically, but she could at least attack him from there.
“So you think that a massive conspiracy to deceive thousands through simple lying and manipulation, without anyone else letting slip that it’s fake, and somehow managed to bring some of your greatest heroes under its influence, is more believable than the idea that she really is the Emperor?”
“Psykers are well known for their ability to control minds; I am sure they would have found a way.”
“And, wouldn’t some others have figured it out as well?” Twilight raised an eyebrow. “Maybe someone who wanted the Empress dead tricked you into thinking she was not who she said she was, and now you’re putting your god’s life at risk because of some other being’s desires.” Markos did not hit her again, but it was clear he wanted to.
“You are trying my patience, witch,” he growled. “Doubt my purity again, and I will leave your corpse to rot by the side of the road.” Twilight said nothing, but she could feel the vehicle decelerating, the squealing of treads against concrete filling the interior. Maybe they took Markos’ threat literally, the small, more irrational part of Twilight’s brain thought.
“My lord, the road has been blocked.” a voice chimed.
“What do you mean, ‘the road has been blocked’?” Markos demanded. “This was marked as a main supply route.”
“It appears that some of the buildings have been damaged during the fighting; the rubble is too much even for the dozer blades to handle.” Twilight watched as Markos’ frustration grew further. Muttering to himself, the Inquisitor stepped onto a nearby bench and opened to top hatch, looking out at what Twilight assumed was the obstruction. With Markos distracted, Twilight began to twist her hands around in her restraints; it was a technique Pinkie had taught her about for slipping out of hoofcuffs (part of a failed escape artist trick she had tried for one of her parties, according to her), and hopefully the same basic principle applied across species and dimensions. She even summoned a small bit of her power to strengthen and protect her hands as the metal dug against her skin.
The Inquisitor did not go lightly on the restraints, but ever so slightly Twilight could feel them begin to give way the more she struggled. The soldiers in the vehicle did not appear to notice, still facing forward even as Markos continued dealing with the obstruction. He would not be distracted for much longer as he finished directing his troops, but the work Twilight had done would be enough that she could continue to struggle and eventually break free before the man brought her to Celestia.
Escaping him would need some more work.
Twilight continued with her struggle, but was momentarily distracted by the sound of engines overhead. These did not sound like the engines of Imperial or Tau craft she had encountered; if anything, they sounded a few magnitudes louder. Though, with the way that sound tended to carry when an object drew closer...
Twilight had no more time to think on the matter before the vehicle shook violently, Twilight yelping as she was tossed about in her seat. Her restraints did loosen, but they would leave some significant bruises along her wrists once she broke free.
“Incoming!” Twilight had only enough time to duck before the vehicle shook again, followed by several massive holes punching through the side armor of the vehicle. Twilight, Markos, and a few others were able to dodge the shrapnel, but the man seated next to Twilight could only jerk about as a large round punched through his armor, chest, and eventually back. She fought back the urge to gag as blood washed down the dead man’s chest, collecting in a small puddle around his boots.
This was what war was like in the Imperium. Fighting Changelings did not lead to such dismemberment.
“Dammed Greenskins!” Markos bellowed. “They cannot understand what they are costing me! Driver, get us out of here now!” Panic overtook reason, and Twilight flushed her power into her wrists. There was a pop as the restraints burst apart, Twilight not even bothering to check her wrists as she sprinted towards the rear hatch. Another burst of her magic tore the door from its hinges, Twilight sprinting out into the street heedless of the warnings from her captors.
The street was filled with chaos; besides the two vehicles Markos had led there were a number of small installations dotting the side of the road, quad-barreled guns blazing. Overhead, a flight of crude, red painted aircraft swooped down on the humans below, smoke pouring out of every possible pipe and hatch as they strafed the plaza. Twilight ducked again as chunks of rock the size of her forearm were blasted from the pavement, some of the shells catching humans as they ducked for cover and tearing through them like they were wet paper.
Twilight started running as one stricken aircraft corkscrewed out of the sky, spiraling down until it slammed into the ground next to the second vehicle. The tank lifted up from the explosion, tumbling back several yards before coming to a rest in a mangled heap. “Mattias!” Twilight screamed, stumbling forward a few steps towards the wreck. He could escape; he and his men were trained in this sort of thing, they would be able to get out and get to cover.
Twilight would not be left alone...
A gunshot rang out, the shell exploding next to Twilight. She whipped around to see Markos and a few of his men, the Inquisitor leveling his pistol at her. “Stop, witch!” he bellowed, firing another round that Twilight barely dodged. Panic took over once more, and she found herself scrambling around rubble and other refuse in her effort to escape the Inquisitor and his men.
The street beyond was no more clear than the rubble; the road was littered with the wrecks of tanks, transports, and aircraft, some still burning from being shot down. Spent casings and broken weapons were scattered about, making every step Twilight took a test in trip avoidance as she ran. Burned and bloodied bodies piled up around wrecked vehicles, some still recognizably human or alien while others were nothing more than shredded, blackened piles of bone and ash. Beyond that, Twilight could see the road terminating in a shattered wall, stretching out into a vast plain marked by small columns of smoke.
Ahead, Twilight saw one tank that did not appear as damaged as the others. Aside from the large hole in its turret, it appeared almost perfectly intact. Stumbling slightly, she scrambled up the side of the tank, tossing open one of the nearby latches before crawling inside.
The space was cramped, smelled of oil, and Twilight did not want to know what the other shapes within were, but it was shelter. She curled up as tightly as she could, keeping the latch slightly open so she could keep an eye out for anyone that might approach. Hopefully, Markos would continue on, and she would be able to escape.
To where? Mattias was dead, Celestia was still in orbit, Corax was gone, Naomi and her Sisters were still back at the camp, and here she was, lost in a vast city with nowhere to run. A tear welled up in Twilight’s eye, but she fought back the urge to cry. Crying would only draw attention to her hiding spot, and that would mean death for her.
And she had gotten through difficult times before. She could get through this... she had to get through this.
“Dammit!” Twilight gave a small jump as she peeked out. Markos and his men had stopped not too far from her, the soldiers sweeping their guns about as they searched. “The witch escaped; had you not wasted so much time trying to scale that rubble we could have captured her by now.”
“Apologies, my lord,” one of the soldiers nearby said. “She will not escape us again.”
“I will have your head if she does...” Markos growled. “Search the area. She cannot have gotten far.” With that the soldiers spread out, keeping their guns at the ready for any sign of trouble. Twilight crouched down, doing her best to stay out of sight and keep her breathing controlled as the men drew close.
There was a pause, Twilight closing her eyes as the soldier reached to open the hatch. Before he could, though, there was a torrent of gunfire from outside, followed by a mess of indiscriminate shouting. This was drowned out by a bellowing roar of “WAAAGH!”, and Twilight ventured a peek outside.
Markos and his soldiers had pulled away from their search as a band of about thirty orks came barreling towards them. They were just as Mattias’ notes had described them; big, green, armed with a variety of rusty axes, cleavers, machetes, and guns. The biggest one was armed with a massive chainsaw hazardly bolted to a long piece of pipe, and as its fellows tore through the soldiers it made a beeline straight for Markos, roaring as it drew back with its weapon.
“You will not defy me, xenos filth!” Markos yelled, raising his pistol as he drew Twilight’s sword from his belt. The Greenskin was not slowed in the slightest, sweeping his weapon in an upward arc towards Markos’ torso. The strike was enough to lift the Inquisitor off his feet, his gun and Twilight’s sword dropping to the ground as they were knocked from his hands.
At first, Markos’ armor held; the whirring chainsaw only created a cascade of sparks as it scraped along the metal. But soon metal gave way, a cloud of red splattering the ork before Markos was flung aside, landing on the ground in a heap. The beast stepped forward, stopping only to stomp on the sword, before bringing his weapon up and driving it into Markos’ back, the Inquisitor flailing for a bit before falling still. Chuckling, the ork reached down and grabbed Markos’ head, giving a sharp twist to rip it from what remained of the man’s torso.
Twilight sank down into the ruined tank as the alien raised the head in triumph, his fellows bellowing with him as he impaled it on a shoulder spike. They roared several more times before charging off down the road, leaving Twilight alone with the sound of distant gunfire.
Now, alone and surrounded by death, Twilight wept.
Markos, you damn fool. You paid for that pride of yours at last.
I sincerely hope Twilight isn't the only one who takes a lesson from this. Celestia could learn a thing or two here as well.
7980471 Oh, this will be a learning experience for a lot of people, not just Twilight.
And here I thought Markos would be a more persistent villain with a chase, trial, attempted execution and all that... To have a nob come and claim his skull? Unexpected, the scrub.
7980523 Fittingly inglorious and anonymous, too, the swine.
7980511 Good. Lunatic self-serving ideologues like Markos are in part a product of her mistakes before the Heresy, after all.
Looks like it's time to start purging the ranks. Inquisitors have far too much free reign, they can start to feel like gods themselves.
Hmph... Markos got what he deserved, but... poor Twilight....
come on twi time to snap and pick up that chain sword and get you some kills maybe the nob take his head for your belt along with markos
Well at lest Markos was spared the Empress's wrath. Now how will Celestia respond when she finds out what nearly happened to her beloved student.
See this, this is why nobody likes the Inquisition.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see the conclusion.
7980897 She's wearing carapace armor (similar to what Stormtroopers or Kasrkin wear) and something similar to a standard Guard uniform (probably in brown). Outside of battle she wears white robes of similar design to a ministorum priest. Eventually she'll get her own power armor, but that's all I'm going to say on the subject
Now I wait to see if Twilight cleanses xenos filth with the heavy bolter/stubber that tank probably has...
twilight might explode a tiny warp storm into being, or remain too paralyzed by trauma.
7980511 Can't Celestia See most everything going on in the universe? Shouldn't she knew very quickly that something happened to Twilight and can just Teleport right to her, or send help quickly? I mean she can Mass Communicate with everything in the universe at once.
7980985 Not particularly. She had her sword, but that's currently in pieces. She won't get fancier duds until after this little incident plays out.
7981033 She could, but she's currently busy clearing away the ork fleet in preparation for her main assault, which can be rather distracting considering how the last time she fought orks, one almost choked her out. She has the powers of a god, but she's still only one person and can't be everywhere at once.
For some strange reason... something like that happening to Markos seems... justified but at the same time rather undeserved.
However at the very least Markos won't be giving grief to them now... no, that'll go to someone, or someTHING else now.
Ya know, I'm glad stupid is finally dead, but I kinda really wanted to see Celestia's rage fall upon him. Oh well. Hehehe.
Good. I was just about to sharpen my pitchfork.
And this is why I hate the Inquisition
Then again the Commissariat isn't much better, but at least we have better reasons for what we do. And we get snazzy hats
I see you're up to date on proper WAAAGH grammar. A proper WAAAGH needs at least three a's to be a WAAAGH.
7981043 that makes sense
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I have a question, do you have any plan that Twilight will meet (on the battlefield) squad of guards (befor her reunion which Mattias and co) and they will help her and after that they begin to serve as part of her protection/personal guard (she has already Sister of the Battle and Inquisitor why not give her some "normal" people) because she will attaches to them. It would be interesting if this unit was consisted from those who survived Orks attack but originally they came from different regiments (from different planets), and maybe even they were some abhuman with them....interaction between Sisters and them ... priceless Twilght reaction on Ratling hedonism or her trying to learn Ogryn something (I personally think that it would be interesting to have there some penal Guardsman too:13th Penal Legion and ect). This might allowed to so many interesting interactions between members of Twi Guard
7980913 PONIES IN POWER ARMOR ARE BEST PONIES
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So, I only just realized what you did with Ruth and Naomi's names. Namely, that the Biblical Naomi was Ruth's mother-in-law and the two were very close. Was this an intentional reference?
That asked, stuff is definitely heating up. Tara just got carted into a war-zone... Well, more of a war-zone, and she's not taking it well. This is clearly Not As Planned.
Shame about Markos. Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.
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It doesn't matter much, both characters turn human when they arrive.
Maybe, but who is the heritic here?
What, what? He is? Could you be a little more specific with your descriptions, please? I can't see anything before this line that would hint at that... I mean, sure his tank got blown up, but the next line is Twilight telling herself that he would escape...
I take it she's lost the ability to teleport?
There are two things you don't expect in Warhammer 40000: Imperial Inquisition, and ORKS.
Overall, good chapter. I'm hopeful that soon, Twilight will learn that in the grim darkness of the 41st (or is it 42nd already?) millenium...
...THERE IS ONLY WAR.
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Well, I was right about that first part in my last post.
Now to see if the Chaos boys show up and save her from the Orks.
7983012 I was wondering when someone would pick up on the theme naming of the Sisters. Ruth and Naomi are indeed named after... Ruth and Naomi, Rebecca is named after Isaac's wife Rebekah (I unintentionally butchered the spelling), and Judith and Veronica are named after a few ladies from the Apocrypha (their names were going to be Rachel and Leah, but for whatever reason I went a different way, probably to have a few less people with names beginning with "R").
7983129 The whole thing with Twilight thinking Mattias is dead is more her panicking than anything. I suppose I could have made that a bit clearer.
As for teleportation... you got me there. In my mind it's because she's still unaccustomed to using magic in the 40K universe, but I never made that explicit, so... yeah...
7983167 46th Millenium, but who's counting?
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And Warhammer 40,000 people (humans, taus, eldars, ...) wouldn't expect the Empress and her student to turn into magic horses.
I would sure like to see Ciaphas Cain meet the Empress and Twilight if they turn ponies.
According to the Cain series, Sisters are allowed to have relationships, it's just that most never have nor get the time.
'Course, the Cain series, so, who knows how GW proper considers it.
7983568 I was not sure if the names were deliberate, but it makes sense with the Sisters being so religious.
I hope Twilight recovers fairly quickly from this.
Well, not gonna say I saw this comming but I saw this comming. Markos was one of those "holier than thou" guys, even for an Inquisitor. Just he died way to easy. Would have loved if the Orks would have played tug of war with him as the rope, like with this one unlucky Kasrkin in some official GW book I once read.
That said, I hope Twilight gets out of this not totaly a mess. She will need some rehab after this.
Fool of an Inquisitor, he escapes as only one with his "mind intact" from assumed rogue Psyker who has taken over Imperium and then when he has captured that Psykers prize pupil he does not make an retreat but heads for the said Psyker?
He was weak in his paranoia! Why would he expose himself to the taint of the Witch again and not act more efficiently! He could have ran and then
tortured it all out from Twiligh!lead Twilight to see error of her ways.7983702 Aren´t there also two lesbian Sorirtas or Inquisitors or something like that in the Cain novels?
7980771 I can imagine her going into the Imperium, finding Markos´s soul, b*tch slapping it, and then blowing it up like she did F*CKING HORUS´S. Granted, Horus kind of came back. What the fck is he doing anyway?
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He was helping Luna overcome her chaos taint. That was last I knew in the previous story.
7980523 Reminds me of this one Khornate from the Legion of the Damned novel. For quite a bit of it, he's going on about how he survived Istvaan, Terra and millennia of warfare, only for him to get his throat slit by a Damned Legionnaire and left on a nameless street to slowly bleed to death.
7999461 Well its not just that. You it could give some more comedy to the story
8002282 Hey, I don't know. I'd follow that first pic into the Eye of Terror is she told me. (Wink wink)
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Well, that new fluff is also what states Dark Age humanity had an alternative to warp travel it used instead by then. Given the Age of Strife happened so badly was because it cut off warp travel almost completely or at least made it extemely difficult... that makes quite a plot hole as it means the fluff contradicts the basis of warhammer 40k's existence.
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Corax's narration mentioned fifteen thousand years. The Age of Strife lasted two thousand and his pinions might be from then. So, either this fic is set five thousand years after the Emperor was interred upon the Golden Throne, or thirteen thousand.
That won't save him from the Emperor's wrath at his attack on Twilight. His soldiers' souls won't be having a good eternity, either.
Had you not already planet your minion in a position of power
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So is Mattius the eye? The eye has come up on its own enough times for me to think it could be a character.
DAMN IT! i wanted our Empress to kill him!!
Looking back through this story (and your author's note specifically), I'm really glad you elected not to ax a bunch of characters unnecessarily. Character death is overplayed for shock value in most stories (fan or otherwise), but it seldom makes the narrative better. Characters who serve the plot (and other characters) better by remaining alive get killed off to drive home grim/dark far more often than they should. Sometimes death needs to happen, even happen often, but I see characters get killed for lousy reasons an uncomfortably high number of times. The mark of a good author is one who kills characters only when it serves the other characters and the story better to do so... and then really digs the knife in with how well the scene is written. Given what happens a few chapters from now, I'd say you've accomplished this.
All of which is a long way of saying 'well done. Thanks for not killing just to kill.'
9527143 You're very welcome . I do try to space out my deaths a bit so they have more of an impact, and hopefully as the story progresses and the stakes get higher I can make sure not to go too "George RR Martin" on the fic (that'd just be bad for everyone).
I'm gonna preface this with the fact I'm really enjoying the story with very few minor quibbles over it. Still, I continue to have extreme trouble accepting that anyone could unknowingly not recognize the Emperor. He's unmistakable both in his aura and his glory (when he's radiating it). Again, his power of charisma wins over any human and most xenos. If Markos knew she was the Emperor, but had forsaken her, that's one thing, but to not know or not accept that she's the Emperor despite knowing in his very soul that that's who Celestia is... doesn't make sense. It's the equivalent of a skilled Mathematician staring at a 2 + 2 = 4 math problem and saying with complete faith that it's incorrect. I know it's late to change the details in this story of Celestia's/The Emporer's power of charisma and the ability to connect with others and earn their trust immediately, but I think it'd be an interesting looksie for you nonetheless.
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This is something that gets explained well in the coming chapters, but the Emperor is no longer the same person as he used to be. In Warhammer 40k (keeping in mind that this story is taking place at roughly 45-46k) the Emperor has been alive for 50,000 years and has spent most of that time fighting and ruling. The Emperor spent billions of years in the alternate universe where he made Equestria and lived as Celestia. We all learn and change from our experiences, and so has Big E.
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There are none so blind as those who will not see.