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Cutie Mark(ed) Crusaders2,629 stories ·500 members

The Diagnosis

Scootaloo's wings are in dire pain, and a trip to the doctor leaves her in more pain than before.

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Snow Shield

Snow Shield #1 · Jan 12th, 2016 · · · The Problem ·

Seems like a good start to a story. You did a great job capturing the characters' feelings, especially Scootaloo's. Keep it up!

bahatumay

bahatumay #2 · Jan 12th, 2016 · · · The Problem ·

Ok, reread the eleventh paragraph. Pretty sure there's something wrong there.

Da Fennec

Da Fennec #3 · Jan 12th, 2016 · · · The Problem ·

Is it Stunted Wing Syndrome or Stumped Wing Syndrome you had the doctor call it both. If not the magic of pegasi I'd disagree with the doctor as Scootaloo gets bigger if her wings don;t change they would be trying move more mass with teh same amount of power she had as a filly

Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #4 · Jan 12th, 2016 · · · The Problem ·

Her hand-shit eyes started to leak tears. [ hard-shut ] I hope.

ToonStar95

ToonStar95 #5 · Jan 13th, 2016 · · · The Problem ·

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Da Fennec

Da Fennec #6 · Jan 13th, 2016 · · · The Confession ·

aunthood belly??
Of course the more rare a condition is the less incentives to research and find cures and now you've added a social stigmata to it much might make even harder to find people to study let alone look for a cure

ToonStar95