This story is a sequel to Heroes Of The Realms
Gidget Cogsworth lived a normal life as normal could ever be for a pony of Equestria. Due to the death of a dear friend of hers Gidget now leads a life of danger to bring this friend back. A dark adventure awaits the young filly as she venture's into an unknown realm to herself. Thanks to the wisdom of Zecora from equestria Gidget beleives she knows the way to bring her friend back from his early and unfortunate demise. What Gidget didn't expect was the unexpected arrival of Princess Twilight and a dear friend of hers from Canterlot High!This is a tale of the decisions that Light and Darkness hold on future events. Can Gidget face the trials ahead? Or fall and become that which she's hated the most.
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THIS IS A SIDE SEQUEL TO HEROES OF THE REALMS. MAKE SURE YOU'VE READ IN ORDER
1. Realms Unite
2. Heroes Of Equestria
3. Heroes Of The Realms
Read Realms Unite 2 up till chapter 5, that's when this story will cross with it.
BEFORE READING THIS STORY OTHERWISE YOU CAN GET CONFUSED!!!!!
"Chronicles".
You might also want to find a friend or follower or fellow author willing to proofread your writing (and especially your descriptions). A misspelled title doesn't inspire confidence in the quality of the story.
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Forgive me. Eheh. Posted this rather quickly. Was being forced off the computer didn't get a chance to finish looking it over.
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You don't have anything to apologize to me for. I'm just trying to say that, if you're going to take the time to share your writing in the first place, you owe it to yourself to polish it up. I know how great it can feel to be done with your chapter and hit that Publish button, but it's an even better rush when you get more likes and comments because those sorts of simple mistakes aren't driving readers away.
As to the story itself ... well, I can't say I can offer any constructive comments, because this just cuts right in on the middle of the action, with a whole bunch of characters I have no clue about (except for Twilight). I realize this is a sequel, but it's basically impenetrable without the content of the previous stories. My suggestion if you want to post this as a separate story rather than a new chapter of the previous one is to take a little time to re-introduce the characters. Check out one of the later books of an ongoing published series for a good example of how professionals do that.
Best,
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