This is NOT a story in the chess game of the gods. It was inspired by it, but it is NOT in the same universe.
This is the story of a young man forcibly pulled from his life, and dumped into another against his will. Can he make the best of it, or will, I don't know, bad stuff happen?
I suck at descriptions, just give it a chance k?
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YAY, a hater in equestria.
Ya.... A hater getting a taste of shock and awe. He's gonna be in brain shock for awhile I'd say.
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At least he gets a cool body
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How do you guys like the rewrite so far?
Better or worse then last time?
Better. I like the way you had him captured.
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Thanks guys,it really means a lot
767126 I didn't read it last time
But it's already good
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Trust me, its a good thing you didn't read the first incarnation of this story xD
Good job Flutter. I will definitely send people ur way.
[I dont think it will do much good but I will do it anyway!.]
It is an improvement compared to the first try. You slowed the pacing down nicely, and it should be interesting to see how everything goes with being held captive. The link to Griffin the Griffin was also nice.
766854 I saw that "nice little tie-in with Griffin", and was like
? WHEN DID I GET IN THIS FIC?
. Having the name Griffin can be a pain in the ass sometimes...
As i got closer to the light, color started to come back into my vision. Tots forgot to caps that eye.
This is amusing. I'ma have to say I laughed. A few times.
907907 Thanks, and thanks for the fave
I like the different point of view rather then a brony or someone who doesnt know what a brony is!
I am Troutking the unofficial greeter of our game!
I am also a vampire thingy that feeds off you new bloods.
Anyway love the different approach!
BAI!
908972 I fav what I like. This seems cool.