It's date night for your parents. Which means you have a babysitter watching you tonight. Yet, this babysitter is different from the others. She's Princess Cadance, the newly crowned royalty-in-training. She loves her job. Perhaps, too much.
Yeeeeeeesh. That's the problem in dealing with Yanderes, they usually end in either death or psychological/emotional scarring for life.
Personally I hope Anon takes a third option and becomes a fairly naive harem protagonist, which usually degrades the threat of a yandere into crazy-but-lovable stalker-level, even if that route rarely ends in an actual polyamorous relationship and more often than not ends in a zero amount of romantic resolution with a moderate chance of unsatisfaction for multiple parties.
Of course, that still beats getting killed by an unhinged pedophilic semi-all-powerful alicorn princess and having your remains eaten by her so that you can both be "together forever", soo, whatever it takes I guess.
Then again, there is something we might be forgetting. Anon is different and has a, ah... presence? Aura? Affinity? Something about him that everypony seems to know makes him different. Yet Cadence seems drawn towards it, possibly more then normal. Maybe Cadence will treat him differently?
The best way this could all end, is if yes, they have their fun, live together, but then as soon as he starts getting older, he starts to realize she's bit my bit, little by little, not being so lovey dovey towards him. And soon, it get's to the point where she doesn't even kiss him that much, he get's suspicious and finds out he's gotten too old for her tastes and has found a knew colt. He has a melt down, and ends up being left behind, and kicked out of the castle, forced to rejoin the world he never really was apart of and get on with his life, fading away into the billions of other Stallions, mares, colts and Fillys who all have their own story's, their own journeys, their own problems and their own lives, and he just has to accept that in the end. He's just another pony in the background of the grand masterpiece.
Yes sad but very deep and would be a thought provoking, emotional end to this roller coaster of brain washing, manipulation an almost predatory tactician filled journey that ultimately, though it breaks him, it then helps him to grow and soon form and join into the societal norm of being "Apart of the crowed". Thous the Irony of someone, who has been seen as a special thing, either in a bad way of being out casted, or in a good way with how Cadence treated him, finally just being able to be accepted by his surrounding, but sadly, having to realize that he really, isn't something that special.
7217543 Any romance there is feels like brainwashing or conditioning which I'd guess falls under dark. But a fair point none the less.
Unless our dear Author is the type who updates the tags as the stories goes on, so as not to spoil the readers. I wouldn't know, but it doesn't seem like it.
Wow! This story is great. It's an absolute thrill to watch as this obsessed psychopathic Cadence goes about wooing, well, the reader. It's unique and done in a way that feels possible to the actual character even if it's a bit of a stretch but I could definitely see the princess of love being attracted to innocence and wanting to 'build' her own partner from the ground up. Her princess status also explains why she knows so much about emotional manipulation too. Anon is also somewhat relatable and doesn't fall into any major clichés of 'pure' innocence.
On a more personal note, Cadence's perfect accuracy and cunning within this story is eerily scary yet enticing as well. But even through that, her character manages to keep it a mystery whether she actually cares about Anon or if he's just a quick fling. I for one hope that Cadence's feelings are true but I also don't want them to go uncaught either. I am very much willing to wait to find out. Great story!
7228206 Hmm, odd, I think they don't like the fact it would be a realistic ending to this kind of relationship, and I think the idea of someone being seen as special or different and then later on in life having to accept they are not. Is possibly abit too somber for their tastes. Most people want them to be together forever and all that. I really life this story and how it doesn't romanticize the pedophilic behavior of Cadance, unless it's from her point of view which I love course it really is how some pedophiles say they see their actions, not as a crime, but as a sexuality. And the fact is, as soon as he no longer serves her needs, she will leave him and move onto the next little colt. And before I get someone saying this, no, I am not trying to force my idea's into the story, I'm just sharing how I as a writer would want, or see this story end. Thank you for the feed back Nyx, Shameful plug: Do check out my page sometime, though yes I haven't got anything posted yet, because of the number of words requirement, and my lack of time to actually write with how busy my life is at the moment, I will though be working hard to at least get some story's out. But yah, point made. CHECK! Pointless and shameful plug in. CHECK. And now a sorry to all those that find my opinion, or rambling annoying.
If this story follows the canon series, then Cadence is probably going to dump Anon, Cadence will run to Shining and the episode of the Canterlot Invasion happens.
If this story doesn't follow the canon, then there are two different scenarios that aro going to happen...
(A) Queen Chrysalis captures Canterlot. Or (B) Shining is replaced by Anon and the whole episode will be deleted because Twilight and her friends were never there.
You close your eyes, realizing your thoughts have strayed away from trying to re-draw the kitty in the ceiling that's playing with the weirdly shaped banana.
Is this supposed to be a euphemism for sex? Either way, it made me laugh
Yay for update!
Anyone got the lotion?
You're missing some quotation marks in there. It should read:
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Fixed! Thanks! :D
Hip hip, hurray! Good chapter mate! Keep it up!
Still don't like where this is headed. She is going to abandon him when he is older and it is gonna be horrible for him.
Wonder if Cadance will have the foresight to keep him away from Celestia...
Can't wait to see Celestia's face when she realizes she failed
Mmmmm... this won't end well for wee Anon methinks... not in the slightest. *Winces*
Good show!
This is all leading to some god awful disaster that'll be bad news for everyone involved. And I want to be there every step of the way.
Yeeeeeeesh. That's the problem in dealing with Yanderes, they usually end in either death or psychological/emotional scarring for life.
Personally I hope Anon takes a third option and becomes a fairly naive harem protagonist, which usually degrades the threat of a yandere into crazy-but-lovable stalker-level, even if that route rarely ends in an actual polyamorous relationship and more often than not ends in a zero amount of romantic resolution with a moderate chance of unsatisfaction for multiple parties.
Of course, that still beats getting killed by an unhinged pedophilic semi-all-powerful alicorn princess and having your remains eaten by her so that you can both be "together forever", soo, whatever it takes I guess.
Cadence, it looks like things went...
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Or age spells are a thing in this story.
But really, yeah she'll probably dump him.
Then again, there is something we might be forgetting. Anon is different and has a, ah... presence? Aura? Affinity? Something about him that everypony seems to know makes him different. Yet Cadence seems drawn towards it, possibly more then normal. Maybe Cadence will treat him differently?
The best way this could all end, is if yes, they have their fun, live together, but then as soon as he starts getting older, he starts to realize she's bit my bit, little by little, not being so lovey dovey towards him. And soon, it get's to the point where she doesn't even kiss him that much, he get's suspicious and finds out he's gotten too old for her tastes and has found a knew colt. He has a melt down, and ends up being left behind, and kicked out of the castle, forced to rejoin the world he never really was apart of and get on with his life, fading away into the billions of other Stallions, mares, colts and Fillys who all have their own story's, their own journeys, their own problems and their own lives, and he just has to accept that in the end.
He's just another pony in the background of the grand masterpiece.
Yes sad but very deep and would be a thought provoking, emotional end to this roller coaster of brain washing, manipulation an almost predatory tactician filled journey that ultimately, though it breaks him, it then helps him to grow and soon form and join into the societal norm of being "Apart of the crowed".
Thous the Irony of someone, who has been seen as a special thing, either in a bad way of being out casted, or in a good way with how Cadence treated him, finally just being able to be accepted by his surrounding, but sadly, having to realize that he really, isn't something that special.
Who's with me on this?
I really like this story I hope they stay together Cadence and Anon. keep it up.
Did Anon got Cadence pregnant in this chapter?
him
Deliciously evil Cadence. I so very much want to see her get her comeuppance.
7216671 well the main reason I see her not staying with him is because this story doesn't have a romance tag. :/
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7217543 Any romance there is feels like brainwashing or conditioning which I'd guess falls under dark. But a fair point none the less.
Unless our dear Author is the type who updates the tags as the stories goes on, so as not to spoil the readers. I wouldn't know, but it doesn't seem like it.
7217274 Wouldn't it be "you"?
I think I now know why your name is flutterPRIEST.
Well then.
The origin of Flurryheart everybody!!!!!!
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You have the most amazing name ever...
I love you as a fat kid loves ice cream and cake.
That promise "came" true.
oh man getting crazy
Wow! This story is great. It's an absolute thrill to watch as this obsessed psychopathic Cadence goes about wooing, well, the reader. It's unique and done in a way that feels possible to the actual character even if it's a bit of a stretch but I could definitely see the princess of love being attracted to innocence and wanting to 'build' her own partner from the ground up. Her princess status also explains why she knows so much about emotional manipulation too. Anon is also somewhat relatable and doesn't fall into any major clichés of 'pure' innocence.
On a more personal note, Cadence's perfect accuracy and cunning within this story is eerily scary yet enticing as well. But even through that, her character manages to keep it a mystery whether she actually cares about Anon or if he's just a quick fling. I for one hope that Cadence's feelings are true but I also don't want them to go uncaught either. I am very much willing to wait to find out. Great story!
more PLEASE
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Hmm, odd, I think they don't like the fact it would be a realistic ending to this kind of relationship, and I think the idea of someone being seen as special or different and then later on in life having to accept they are not. Is possibly abit too somber for their tastes. Most people want them to be together forever and all that. I really life this story and how it doesn't romanticize the pedophilic behavior of Cadance, unless it's from her point of view which I love course it really is how some pedophiles say they see their actions, not as a crime, but as a sexuality. And the fact is, as soon as he no longer serves her needs, she will leave him and move onto the next little colt. And before I get someone saying this, no, I am not trying to force my idea's into the story, I'm just sharing how I as a writer would want, or see this story end. Thank you for the feed back Nyx, Shameful plug: Do check out my page sometime, though yes I haven't got anything posted yet, because of the number of words requirement, and my lack of time to actually write with how busy my life is at the moment, I will though be working hard to at least get some story's out. But yah, point made. CHECK! Pointless and shameful plug in. CHECK.
And now a sorry to all those that find my opinion, or rambling annoying.
Beautifully written.
Wow, this is like my childhood. Almost, exactly my childhood, without the babysitter, of course.
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If this story follows the canon series, then Cadence is probably going to dump Anon, Cadence will run to Shining and the episode of the Canterlot Invasion happens.
If this story doesn't follow the canon, then there are two different scenarios that aro going to happen...
(A) Queen Chrysalis captures Canterlot.
Or
(B) Shining is replaced by Anon and the whole episode will be deleted because Twilight and her friends were never there.
7314053 ALTERNATE UNIVERSE! READ THE TAGS!
no don't leave!! I'm pretty sure they made amends
Is this supposed to be a euphemism for sex? Either way, it made me laugh