It's date night for your parents. Which means you have a babysitter watching you tonight. Yet, this babysitter is different from the others. She's Princess Cadance, the newly crowned royalty-in-training. She loves her job. Perhaps, too much.
And I was just thinking about this story today too! Wow i didn't see this coming. Cadence truly is obsessed, and its still incomplete! I wonder what could come next for our poor Anon.
7630161 I like your profile picture here...It fits the story. Bloody nose because you read most of the clop, and afterwords..You´re like: ¨Wait..wtf happened?¨
7630246 ... I was wondering why pencil edited this. At first I shrugged it off, not worrying about and then I read everything so far. Now, after reading this, I see who wrote it. How's it goin friend?
That was great! I do have to admit I was totally rooting for Cadence here. I love Cadence's quick turn to desperation in this chapter.
She finally really manipulated Anon. So far she's manipulated the ponies and the world around him to make it seem like he was in a much more desperate situation but now she's actually manipulated HIM. What excites me even more is that Cadence said that the spell couldn't be reversed, to Celestia herself, so I'm looking to finding out if that is true or not. Which is a perfect segway over to my more philosophical ponderings about what was said in this chapter.
We all know that Cadence is the princess of love. Even though Celestia is her mentor, wouldn't Cadence's word on love undermine Celestia's word on the subject. This goes back to the question of whether or not a dumb parent can raise a genius prodigy. IF Cadence is naturally gifted in the subject of love; wouldn't she, in a world where your destiny is literally stamped on the side of your butt and everyone is just naturally good at something, know more and have more say than Celestia in this specific subject. She said that what her and Anon had was true love, their love being the hybrid bastardation between the relationship of a friend, lover, and mother. Perhaps Cadence is right and Celestia is wrong? Technically, Cadence isn't committing incest and her only folly is that Anon is underage. The entire scenario is one that we know she has obviously planned out for perhaps months and is a near perfect loop hole in the standard moral code most of us follow. Only through magic is it actually possible for this hybrid relationship to actually work. So, I'd say that in this very specific, super rare, and nearly impossible to do relationship, Cadence is right. I'm assuming that Anon is around the age of 10 and Cadence in her late teens like 18. While the age gap seems large, she is not old enough to be his mother at all and if he was 18 she'd be 26, it's not super common but it's not unheard of. I could also see Cadence having very little if not zero sensitivity towards age considering she's immortal and she knows she's immortal. Yeah, I think Cadence is right in THIS situation. A whole lot goes into her being right, and I'm pretty sure the things she did to set this situation up is illegal but overall, she's right. Quantity wise, there is more love in their relationship than the standard while also avoiding incest.... But whatever, I don't know. I'm not good with words but I get the feeling Cadence isn't super twisted and bad. She's sorta like robin hood in a way. In the end, she's "giving to the needy" but she still had to break the rules to do it.
Anyway! Love this story and I can not wait to see the aftermath of everything that just happened. It has almost a criminal minds feel to it as you get to see the story from the innocent Anon's point of view and then to the desperate Cadence's point of view who knows she's doing bad but has her own excuses for it and seems to ACTUALLY love Anon. The writing was great and immersing and this characterization of Cadence is both alien enough to be unpredictable but true enough to the character that she doesn't seem like a completely different pony. It's a deliciously twisted Romeo and Juliet story that keeps me engaged leagues more than two mopey teens yelling at each other from balconies. You story is most definitely on my "Greats of Fimfiction" shelf.
This story was always oh, so wonderfully fucked up but the Mother Spell brought it up to eleven.
Wanting more. I can see 3 diffrent outcomes but I vote for Cady getting locked up like some kind of Nightmare but Anon always remembers her and one day goes to Celestia to visit (De)Cadence. What ensues is a Fungeon,
7691300 your comment, is exactly what I wanted to say, thank you also, love your name for this Cadance : Decadance, it have a pretty nice ring to it (also, they should really add more pony-moji on fimfic)
She holds down your hooves with her own. Cadance scans the clearing and your surroundings as you look down to the light redness on your shoulders from where she held you down.
inconsistency between these sentences
It would take months, years of planning to get this stage once more.
think you need another to in there after get
who stands deathly still, watching you face against your mentor.
face against sounds like she's pushing Celestia with her face.
you feel a rib inside of you move a direction it wasn't designed to.
move in a
Cadence why you so confused, and damn that was intense
7692521 I find it ironic Have you ever looked up cadence in the dictionary it means the final sequence of musical notes to partly or completely complete a composition.
Heres the fun part cadence is the princess of love however you can also see love as the final thing we look for before we die so i say well played hasbro and the directors of the series for thier knowledge of words
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so basically celestia is incredibly incompetent here
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HNNNNNGGGHHH
Mistakes were made. They are in bold.
Nnoooiiccee!!! Cant wait for the aftermath!
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Corrections have been made. They are in story.
Ooooooh damn... so close and yet... so far... mmmm...
Nice chappie.
Thank you Flutterpriest for another chapter!
Waiting for the next chapter.
Holy hot damn! If that wasn't the craziest pot of mashed potatoes ive ever seen!
Wow, that was intense!
seems all that the orb said in the first chapter has come to past. will it end darker or perhaps a ray of hope can shine thorugh.
wow. that was mad house.
The end is near can't wait for the next chapter.
And I was just thinking about this story today too! Wow i didn't see this coming. Cadence truly is obsessed, and its still incomplete! I wonder what could come next for our poor Anon.
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LIke always, amiright or amiright?
That went really dark, wow.
I like this story hopely it ddosen't have a sad end
This story is so creepy.
This is weird.
Is it bad that I wanted Cadance to win?
7631830 No. That's just good storytelling.
7630161 I like your profile picture here...It fits the story. Bloody nose because you read most of the clop, and afterwords..You´re like: ¨Wait..wtf happened?¨
Well, that´s vinyls face at least.
I can't even image what the epilogue is going to be like.
Well that escalated quickly. Wonder what the next chapter involves!
holy shit, I am so hyped!
7630246 ... I was wondering why pencil edited this. At first I shrugged it off, not worrying about and then I read everything so far. Now, after reading this, I see who wrote it. How's it goin friend?
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This post confuses me...
7653679 Any questions, in particular, that I can answer to clear any confusion?
Was that the end?
7655514
No
7655527 but cadence has been detained by celestia, anon is being returned to his parents, and I can't see any clop coming of this what so ever.
That was great! I do have to admit I was totally rooting for Cadence here. I love Cadence's quick turn to desperation in this chapter.
She finally really manipulated Anon. So far she's manipulated the ponies and the world around him to make it seem like he was in a much more desperate situation but now she's actually manipulated HIM. What excites me even more is that Cadence said that the spell couldn't be reversed, to Celestia herself, so I'm looking to finding out if that is true or not. Which is a perfect segway over to my more philosophical ponderings about what was said in this chapter.
We all know that Cadence is the princess of love. Even though Celestia is her mentor, wouldn't Cadence's word on love undermine Celestia's word on the subject. This goes back to the question of whether or not a dumb parent can raise a genius prodigy. IF Cadence is naturally gifted in the subject of love; wouldn't she, in a world where your destiny is literally stamped on the side of your butt and everyone is just naturally good at something, know more and have more say than Celestia in this specific subject. She said that what her and Anon had was true love, their love being the hybrid bastardation between the relationship of a friend, lover, and mother. Perhaps Cadence is right and Celestia is wrong? Technically, Cadence isn't committing incest and her only folly is that Anon is underage. The entire scenario is one that we know she has obviously planned out for perhaps months and is a near perfect loop hole in the standard moral code most of us follow. Only through magic is it actually possible for this hybrid relationship to actually work. So, I'd say that in this very specific, super rare, and nearly impossible to do relationship, Cadence is right. I'm assuming that Anon is around the age of 10 and Cadence in her late teens like 18. While the age gap seems large, she is not old enough to be his mother at all and if he was 18 she'd be 26, it's not super common but it's not unheard of. I could also see Cadence having very little if not zero sensitivity towards age considering she's immortal and she knows she's immortal. Yeah, I think Cadence is right in THIS situation. A whole lot goes into her being right, and I'm pretty sure the things she did to set this situation up is illegal but overall, she's right. Quantity wise, there is more love in their relationship than the standard while also avoiding incest.... But whatever, I don't know. I'm not good with words but I get the feeling Cadence isn't super twisted and bad. She's sorta like robin hood in a way. In the end, she's "giving to the needy" but she still had to break the rules to do it.
Anyway! Love this story and I can not wait to see the aftermath of everything that just happened. It has almost a criminal minds feel to it as you get to see the story from the innocent Anon's point of view and then to the desperate Cadence's point of view who knows she's doing bad but has her own excuses for it and seems to ACTUALLY love Anon. The writing was great and immersing and this characterization of Cadence is both alien enough to be unpredictable but true enough to the character that she doesn't seem like a completely different pony. It's a deliciously twisted Romeo and Juliet story that keeps me engaged leagues more than two mopey teens yelling at each other from balconies. You story is most definitely on my "Greats of Fimfiction" shelf.
This story was always oh, so wonderfully fucked up but the Mother Spell brought it up to eleven.
Wanting more. I can see 3 diffrent outcomes but I vote for Cady getting locked up like some kind of Nightmare but Anon always remembers her and one day goes to Celestia to visit (De)Cadence. What ensues is a Fungeon,
7691300 your comment, is exactly what I wanted to say, thank you
also, love your name for this Cadance : Decadance, it have a pretty nice ring to it
(also, they should really add more pony-moji on fimfic)
7692290 Decadence is from Night Shift. I just spoiled one of the greatest fics out there but ok...
There's a reading now?
Oh dear god.
inconsistency between these sentences
think you need another to in there after get
face against sounds like she's pushing Celestia with her face.
move in a
Cadence why you so confused, and damn that was intense
7692521 could you send thou link to we?
7692521
I find it ironic Have you ever looked up cadence in the dictionary it means the final sequence of musical notes to partly or completely complete a composition.
Heres the fun part cadence is the princess of love however you can also see love as the final thing we look for before we die so i say well played hasbro and the directors of the series for thier knowledge of words
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