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Atriark the Scribe


Words Hold Power

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This is not the Fallout world Kkat created
Death... death is all we know.

A thousand years ago, Celestia's hoof was forced. Her sister had grown jealous and sought to end the world with an insane plan. But the banishment wasn't the end. With the power gap in Equestria, their enemies saw the perfect opportunity to attack. Celestia and her armies fought back as best they could, but with the Elements of Harmony disappearing, her options were few. Millions died, but with an attack on multiple fronts, the ponies were pushed to the brink of extinction. As a last, desperate attempt to keep her ponies from being eradicated, Celestia confided with her most powerful mages and developed an immensely powerful weapon that ended the war, driving off the invaders that weren't outright killed.

But the spell had a side effect. It bathed the land in a toxic radiation, rendering much of Equestria a dry, barren wasteland. The war is long over, but a mysterious enemy threatens everypony. Unknown in name, and intentions, they use Changeling spies to abduct and replace ponies, and even gryphons. Whether the Equestria Wasteland knows it or not, there is a war going on.

Because War...

War never changes.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )

Well I have gone through and I like the idea of the story so far, changing the names was nice as world changing doesn't mean they have the same names or be the same sort of pony so like that idea. So I look forward to reading more of it when it comes and and see where the story goes and who else made it into this timeline.

Its not a bad point and don't think it matters too much but ponyville wasn't around 1000 years ago was only founded when Granny smith was little, but its your universe and things can change how you want.

Is it me or does Paladin Armor just seam wrong to say maybe because don't have the normal flow if pony names, but I like the Scribe Sparkle fits nice and still flows well like to see what the names the others have

This seems like it could be the start of something interesting. It still retains the essential background of Fallout, but I do feel that the idea that only a physical god like Celestia could cause it makes a lot of sense. However, as far as settings go from the first chapet, it seems a bit sparse. I hope to see more world building in the future, as there is a vast amount of room for both a reflection of Fallout canon and a large degree of artistic freedom.

The second chapter poses a fascinating question: How would the hardened denizens of the Fallout wasteland respond to something as strong and sudden as the nigh-unexpected reappearance of a different goddess? Will she be as mighty as she thinks she is or will the wasteland be too much even for a nightmare? I also think that the Paladin and the Scribe are well cast; I am quite curious to see the roles and positions our other beloved characters will play.

So someone can do another Fallout x MLP crossover and recieve the same if not similar response from first time readers as Kkat did with FoE. My God...
well hopefully he/she doesn't let fame go to his/her head.

The cause for the fallout makes logical sense, a God goes overboard with her naturally gifted God like powers. Well she has help but I mean, come on it's Celestia, Goddess of the Sun! Eternal deity who's only equal is a reality altering cluster-abomination of animals.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

I like this too bad it's dead unless it really isn't.

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