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Twilight loses the one she loves and remembers a time spell she used quite a while back. Being warned about the consequences of changing things in the past she makes a difficult choice to either go back and try and save her or to leave it be and live alone.
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Holy crud, the feels!
My heart just broke after reading this.
Please continue this!
Oh no. That's not good.
Poor Twilight. I hope things will go better.
Wow. So she went as far back to defeat the sirens but it still didn't work out. I hope she figures out something.
6730620 yes she now has started to alter the time line as we know it. Will she ever be happy with Sunset again? You'll have to wait to find out. =)
6731266 I'm glad you finally updated. I was very anticipated when I saw the new chapter.
6731455 I do apologize for the delay. Been working a lot recently and I had to make sure the chapter came out right. ><
6731586 That's okay. It was well worth the wait. Especially the end result.
6731593 so tell me: what are the things you like about it so far and dislike? It will help me improve upon my writing next the chapter.
6731900 Well I like the fact that Twilight and Sunset are together from the get go as well as her going out of her way to save Sunset from death. What I don't like is that so far she's failed in doing so but that's what makes this story so great. I didn't like the fact that she ended up with Rainbow while Sunset ended up with ugh Flash Sentry. I hate him so much, I wish he never existed.
6732701 ahahaha we ALL feel that way about Flash. But that's the point. By altering the past things change in the present weather we like them or not. But I'm glad you are enjoying it and hope everypony else is too. ^_^
Wow. That was a pretty intersting chapter. I can't wait to see how this ends.
I didn't expect such an ending.
6981121 lol what did you expect? and was it good or bad? ><;;
Is there going to be a sequel
6981655 It was good. I would've thought that Twilight saved Sunset but she ended up blowing up the mirror.
6981944 No there won't be a sequel to this one.
6982172 yeah that was the only way she could have fixed everything and in a sense she did save her.
6982630 That's very true.
6982630
but now sunset will never find the magic of friendship will remain bitter and angry and will still get that disease and die only now she will die alone with out any friends and never having been loved
7002371 no she will still live. It was the end of Rainbow rocks that caused her to get sick when she transformed. She may be bitter and cold but at least she's alive.
7002574 still sad that she is alone and with out friends just going to get more and more full of hate
This is not a good ending for Sunset, she'll never become a better person now. I feel more bad for her then Twilight after this.
7345273 True, but at least she's still alive. Maybe one day she'll still meet Twilight and change to be a better person.
I LOVE the ending, it fits perfectly. Great story, I only whish that the start, in particular Twi and Sunny's relationship would have been more detailed. And I wonder how Twilight's actions repercuted on Sunset's life in the other world. Did she end up staying bitter and sad and still die of her decease but this time alone? Maybe could you do an omake about it? Please? Again, great fic, good job :)
8306641 Thanks! I'm glad you really enjoyed it. The way I envisioned it is that Sunset never returned to Equestria to steal the crown because Twilight had to break the portal on her side. She way she got the disease was when she "ponied" up in Rainbow Rocks the first time. But time travel is a bit tricky to write and once again I'm glad you enjoyed it!
dang immediately saddening...
I hope Twilight saves Sunset
oh no this is gonna be one of those completely tragic she won’t be able to save her so she has to deal with losing her...
sometimes I hate it when I’m right.
Disappointed you went with this nonsensical undoing of everything in the movies instead of the obvious fix of simply going back far enough to take Sunset back with her after Rainbow Rocks where any magical abnormalities could be detected and fixed (assuming being back in Equestria didn't fix it all by iteself). Or even taking her back with her instead of leaving her with her human friends in the first place. Either could have both saved Sunsets life and still allowed at least a chance at a relationship. Twilight's choices made no sense.