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I love writing and my very first fanfic is on here. Any kind of feed back helps me out so please don't be shy and let me know what you think of my work. <3


Sunset heard about a new game that peaked her interest. Dungeons and Dragons. It was a game of imagination and where the only boundaries were those of your own mind. Sunset took a while and studied, researched, and got the required books she would need to host her own adventure. When she felt she was ready she brought the idea to her friends and they were all aboard. Now join them every week as they journey through the lands of Valatorium.

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Comments ( 35 )

Is this story actually going to continue? I read these type of stories and are or were good, but the authors stop updating them after a few chapters and i give up on them.

I hate to read this and then it stops all the sudden.

7975334 Yes this story will continue on. :twilightsmile: I want to see how far they will take their characters.

This sounds really good so far. I can't wait to read more.

7975604 Thanks buddy. I hope to make this one just continuous as they keep playing the game.

I mean, I'm all about D&D. Play it myself, the stupid amount of recurring jokes will never stop.

Wait Shining Armor is a D&D geek, shouldn't Twi have at least passing knowlage of D&D? Or maybe she does but has never played, only watched?

7977620 in this story Sci-Twi perhaps heard of the game but even if her brother played it they never played it at their house. Plus she lived at Crystal Prep that whole time, remember? Then changed schools to Canterlot High.

7977640 I expect Shiney was a D&D geek for a long time, but it's easy to assume Twilight just never played.

Oh Sunset,... the novice GM's early success cheer. The frustration may come soon.... :trixieshiftleft::trollestia:

7979718 you know it. This is only the beginning. :pinkiehappy:

7984391 Well I hope you enjoy it when you get around to it. :twilightsmile:

You have almost all of the characters for a good D&D game but uh where is Sunsets character in the cover art?

8005731 Sunset is the DM. She is every where and no where at once. :twilightsmile:

8005741 Well one would at least think sunset could at least have a spot on the cover art dressed like the DM from the cartoon show of Dungeons and Dragons :pinkiecrazy:

8005750 LoL. I just found this one and thought it fit. I couldn't find any that actually had Sunset in it. If you happen to come across one let me know and I'll take a look at it. :twilightsheepish:

8007004 don't worry there's plenty more to come! :twilightsmile:

I am loving this story so far. Keep up the good work!! :pinkiehappy:

8265024 thank you very much! It's a lot of work to play 6 characters and a DM but I am having fun with it. :twilightsmile:

Oh please please please write more soon! This has been fun to read, especially having grown up as a D&D nerd! :3

8432943 Don't worry there will be more, I've just been busy recently and haven't had time to sit down and write down another chapter. :twilightblush:

Well great to hear!!! Also, I was wondering something when I was reading this before, but is there supposed to be some "tensions" and flirts between some of the girls? Because I for one caught what felt like some :3 lol

Oh well I'd have to reread to catch other ones, but there seems to be something goin on between AJ and Rares it felt like.... ;) at least some flirtatious implications anyways lol :raritywink:

I'll reread to point out the others because I coulda sworn there were some others just gotta check ;)

8433423 no worries. But there is no intent on all that but if it comes off like it perhaps I'll roll with it.

Pinkie had a whole bag of randomly assorted candies.

how is somthing randomly sorted?

8537601 When it comes to Pinkie Pie...who knows? =P

i also cant wait for what is next! i hope to see it

Only issue I have is how close the characters are to their players. I get it though, their first characters are likely to reflect themselves.

I still approve!

Rarity's character hears a voice when she looks into the pool of the angel and demon statues.

That's either something to do with the statues themselves or it has something to do with Rarity's character. Hmm.

I would have made a thief with illusion

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