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z_shimada
I'm a professional technical writer who dabbles in creative writing in his free time. I've been told my stories are very good, so I thought I'd throw a couple up here.
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Edit: I realize now that I'm probably being too hard on something I've never read. Uh. Keep on keeping on, man.
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Are you referring to the content or the quality of delivery? Just because you don't like the content doesn't mean the story itself is bad.
I gave it the ole college try and read through it despite it not being something I'd normally read. Needless to say, still not my cup of tea, but keep up the good work and hopefully your next work is received better.
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Thank you. This is probably the most useful feedback I have gotten for this story. Granted, I expected the negative reception.
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The paragraphs are in block format. I don't like indentations as a personal taste, and as such, do not use them.
Your personal preferences aside, I will admit Rarity was a little out of character. That was the intention. By all rights, any story that involves sexual or any other non-canon situations could be construed as being out of character. Though I think your choice of words could probably use a little work. I am far from autistic (The sheer fact that I can even write a coherent story is proof of that.)