• Published 2nd Sep 2015
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Falling - RikaChan



Falling, falling, falling... But will she ever reach the ground?

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Epilogue - Flying

Luna sighed, the first to break the silence. She had noticed her sister become more quiet, but this was coming too far. She couldn't handle it anymore.

"Tia," Luna started slowly, choosing her words carefully, "Are you okay?" She knew it was a stupid question to ask, but it was the first that came to mind. Of course she wasn't okay! But Celestia nodded, still just staring down at her dinner and moving it around with her fork.

"Tia..." Luna's voice was soft and caring. She was worried about her sister, but how could she fix the problem, if she didn't know what the problem was in the first place?

TO BE CONTINUED IN FLYING

Comments ( 6 )

This doesn't seem like the way Celestia would think. Sure, she has to maintain a public persona, but whenever she has a problem in the show she gets Twilight or Luna or someone else to help. Even if she doesn't ask outright, she still finds a way to get help, because she knows she can't do everything on her own.

6386531 Thanks for the information, it's greatly appreciated, but I'm not sure I completely agree with that. I feel like everyone has their problems, and not all of them are seen as 'important enough' in your mind to share.

6386595 Miku chan! Thank you for showing that to me, I've never actually heard of it. It definitely was interesting :3

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It seems to be weighing heavily on her mind, I don't see why she would consider it unimportant. Especially since she seems to be thinking about it while spending time with her sister, who is the go-to expert on this kind of problem.

6387896 Okay, your opinion has been expressed, and I see your point. What do you want me to do about it? Re-write the story?

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