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While travelling by train, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash bump into one another serendipitously after having not seen each other for many years. The time they are given allows them a chance to catch up on each other's lives, loves, and anguish, and open old wounds that were once thought forgotten.
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Some of the dialogue doesn't quite sit right with me, but it's an interesting idea.
6313976 Yeah, this is my first attempt at an MLP:FiM fanfic so I'm still working on getting the characters right. Thanks for the input!
Jesus...did not see that freight train of feels coming..
Heh...why did i make that pun?
It's been a couple of hours since i read that chapter and I STILL FEEL AWFUL
WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!?
6314854 That's OK... puns are therapeutic! Maybe...
6315174 I guess I'd better hurry and finish the final chapter since it's a little more cathartic! I'm gonna work on it some more tonight!
6315634 Yeah, that'll be nice.
I'm being serious btw, you managed to mess me up real good. I applaud you for it, not many people get to do that...
6315643 Well, thank you! I'm very pleased to have your comments to help guide me with future stories of this rather sad nature!
6315721 Please no more sad stories, they may put me into depression
6315776 No worries - after I finish this one the next one is an absurd comedy - 180 degrees different in tone!
6315858 I don't want to damper your mood or anything, but i'm now questioning my own mortality and my life. Something in your fic is sending me into a crazy emotional episode and it's scaring the shit out of me. I wish i was friggin joking! I REALLY DO!
Is this you first fic? I like it, I really do, I think you got the characters just right! And the story is good to.
6316654 I'm glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for letting me know in the comments here! This isn't the first fanfic I've ever written, but it is the first MLP one. I'm still going to work on trying to make sure the MLP characters stay as true to their show counterparts as I possibly can, even though you likes how they were written! Thanks again!
Wow, I loved that ending! This entire story was beautiful!
*claps* Bravo my friend! I really did love the story, its great narrative and has a good idea. I can't wait for more story ideas to come from you.
I'd love to see that comedic reunion chapter.
6334551 Thanks! I cannot take too much credit for the ending, though - its tone and structure was inspired by the end of To Kill a Mockingbird!
6334602 Thank you! I'm getting started on another story tonight!
6335394 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jhozi1nrFegyxrAoov755BgyF-XEp6Ku_Q0iYAQbQeg/pub Since it's going to be a while before I revisit this continuity, here's the part I jettisoned. It's still pretty rough, so I can't even guarantee it will look anything like this once it is completed.