This is a series of stories following Leon Nexus, and his friends, as they travel across the lands of Equestria and beyond to find a way to rid the evil within him, but can you truly remove something that is a part of you, whether you like it or not?
Hello readers, this is my first fanfic, and I'd like to do something interesting with it. Throughout Leon's adventures he will meet many different characters...YOU GUYS!
I'm not joking, in every chapter (excluding the prologue) there will be a "speacial guest" so to speak. This special guest will be a reader's OC, with permission of course. If you're interested in your OC being a part of this series, then please send me a message descibing your OC so that I don't screw up his/her personality.
Anyways, I hope you'll enjoy the story, and all of the characters within. 
Fantastic job, Leon. Can't wait to read the rest
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It is really good and well though out, and I am not saying that to be nice. I hope you continue (I normally cant read for that long but I was actually intrigued by the story)
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Ok, let me give my brief review or 'vibe' if you will, of this. To improve your writing of this fic from here on out, perhaps it might be best to fix your olde language with Luna to keep her in your OC of her. As such, here is some help as I actually speak a little of the Olde language.
Thy - Your (plural)
Thou - You, plural.
Thine- (Your, Singular)
Thee- You, Singular
E.g. "Thine blush is showing, friend of mine; perhaps t'would be best to reign thy instincts unto a more representable manner for thee and thine friends. *looks to them* Begone, thou of carnal desire!".
Also, refrain from using constant caps; perhaps use ranting to oneself with your OC to show minor psychosis or schizophrenic action. Using constant caps can degrade the story in long sentences.
Also, I understand the connection between Luna and your OC, but please show a little more hostility; this is a gore and possible dark fic :) combat welcome; maybe a chase scene later on?
I like it, it's interesting. Now I want to read more v:
jfhbveqhakcvnsN Leeooonnn twas beautiful! Cant wait for the next one. I just... huvjadbva no words... just.. sounds.. that sound like.. fnkhiauegbvalnkf :P
Read title as adventures of neon Lexus
10/10 would ride again.
This was a really good one Leon, I really enjoyed the "switch"
I don't much like cliffhangers because I want it now.
But this was a very good chapter, I like how your OC has two different identities. 
Update due to changes: Very good work Leon!
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Hope I don't disappoint.
I can't stop reading Nexus in this very evil British voice, halp.
Oh and I'm loving it like McDonald's
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I am sorry, but I cannot help you. You are under the power of your own imagination, and nothing can beat that.
(This would be so much better if I still worked at McDonald's.)