You really need someone to look over your stuff before posting, you constantly are missing either commas or periods. Plus you either forget to capitalize some words and even names or you capitalize words that shouldn't be. You also misspell a few things such as machine gun, that's two words not one.

The chapters are a too short given how you just rush through it without much detail and jump around so much as well.

Can't wait to see where this goes.

Interesting

6795034 Yeah, It is kind of a rush job, Isn't it? I'll try to do better in the next few chapters. The criticism is definitely appreciated!

dude this is such an amazing story! I noticed that a lot of people disliked this story. please don't let that diminish your spirits please continue with your story at your own pace.

>Two brothers doge mortar shells and machinegun rounds side by side during the darkest days of the great war.

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6799150 fixed.

So when can we see a new chapter to this story?

6899414 I'm workin' on it now In fact, but between work and my other projects it'll be slow.

Holy shit whiskey fam... this is a pretty great fic mate... shame you haven't updated in 2 years.

Please, for the love of god, update this! This is amazing!

Update pls

Hope you can find time/inspiration needed to continue this story, it’s quite good!