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ChasingResonance


I write stuff and help people write stuff. If you want something written, or need help writing, I can help. Always move onwards!

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Dragons are the strongest and fiercest of all creatures on the planet. They can withstand the harshest of conditions and anything nature throws at them. So what has the entire dragon race terrified and too scared to stay in their own country, much less ask the ponies for help?


Brief warning, it is rated teen for now, though that might change. Mild to strong language will be present, as well as gratuitous violence, but no gore. Cover art cannot be linked to, as it is a picture I scanned in, due to me having been the one to draw it. If it looks fuzzy, try clicking on it, and it should be crystal clear when you view it individually.

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Comments ( 3 )

You have piqued my curiosity. I look forward to seeing how this turns out.

Mildly interested. I look forward to what comes of this CR.

Hmm, I like it, but the ending was the hook. The beginning was not much of a hook or bait that would normally get others to keep reading, it lacked luster, but as it progressed it gained luster, and became more smooth until the ending where you had the hook of the story. That is the only thing I found that can be of service to you for improvement, if you can put something that grabs the attention of the reader early on, you can get around those who just skim the first paragraph, don't get hooked, and leave.

So to recap, hook to late and you need to luster everywhere! Other than that gg and I wait to see progress, because if you can write as good as you can edit, this gonna be good!

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