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Did not expect the town wide thing. Does tat mean all of Equestria is affected? RUN!!!
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It's only in a small radius of Twilight's Crystal Castle and the Tree of Harmony.
Who would complain about being in a situation with some hot girls?
6107927 So, basically all of ponyville.
man spike is one lucky bastard
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Yep.
6107941 You're sly, sir. But you can make a bad ass clop fic.
6107941 so do they match the image art for how they look in the story
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No. That's the only bimbo image I could find of the Mane 6. I want a little more variety and a tag bit less bimbo than the picture.
6107970 ok
Hmm...
Not sure how I feel about it being all of Ponyville, but I like what it's done for Mr. and Mrs. Cake.
But...I gotta say, I wish Pinkie were a little smaller in the bust department. H cup seems a bit oversized to my tastes, and it doesn't bode well for Fluttershy given most fanart has her with the biggest bust in anthro and humanized art.
Persoanlly, I don't think a girl's breasts should be bigger than her head. It just looks weird to me once you get up there. ...not to mention the back problems those are bound to cause.
...also, several times you referred to Spike as 'her'.
Very nice. I do hope though that by Spike impregnating the girls that it subdues the effects somewhat.
But, here's a thought for ya. What if the effect was more than he's realizing? What if those closer to the center of the castle start to turn female if they're not already, but with the castle's effects having limited range? But, as a dragonkin, he's immune. Just a thought.
Either way, interesting so far.^^
did she just slip him an aphrodisiac?
Hope we will get more clop chapters.
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Something powerful at least, you know, if Pinkie act like that everyday, imagine how she acts in the bed!
6108228 rrow~.
But Pinkie is just slightly more horny Pinkie. That's fine with me.
Your chapters are entirely to short. They have no arch or flow to them, they just start and cut off abruptly.
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That might be a little bit different if Fluttershy's 8 feet tall, though. I think it said that pinkie's 5'5".
6108466 look I'm not going to say the story doesn't have its problems but if you don't like it why do you continue to read it and at this point You're not really reviewing just finding things to complain about
6108595 Two reasons. One, the entire thing is just so ridicules that I find some comedic joy in it. Two, I hope that the author will read my comments and learn and improve his writing. The story has key problems with its pacing, characterization, and the supposed bodies of the mane six, and others, are so ridiculously impossible that any time I read the measurements I either laugh of get torn out of the story due to their absurdity. I do like the story itself, it's interesting and funny I will say that. But liking something doesn't mean I won't point out the flaws in it, especially the clearly obvious ones that this has. I may be 'complaining', but are my complaints false or invalid?
6107224 I've braced myself.
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6108630 you know you're right I can see your point of the argument and honestly I wish he would improve some of the things about it we'll just have to hope because it's gotten so popular he will work harder on it
I actually like the idea of a radius affection zone of using the elements; could make for a great plot for a story...well one that isn't so humorous as this delightful piece of literature. I'm glad you found a way to make each word count to keep the chapters short, but no less entertaining. I can not wait for more.
Did I comment on this yet? I can't remember if I have. I think I did though...
Anyway, this is surprisingly very interesting. I am curious as to see what ditsy Fluttershy is like. I'm expected to contract diabetes from her. If I don't get diabetes in the next chapter you have failed your job, okay? Just letting you know.
Like everyone in ponyville, you meant it when you said you were fucking around
All joking aside, I like this. Sometimes I just want to read a fun story. If it may happen to have sex, then so be it. Good job.
...Spike is a bitch. Turning down orgies? Upset that women are after him? Sad at a loss of sleep because he's getting laid? What the fuck?
He needs to man the fuck up.
Hmm... this is funny.
And so I make my first comment on a sexy times fanfiction!
...
Kinda, there was this one that had it's sexy times on another website so... yeah.
Anyway, I'll guess I'll just follow this because, hey, seeing the entire local of Ponyville get turned into OMG party funny girls, like Pinkie Pie, is a nice treat, and sex will be along for the ride.
So onward! To the FLUTTER!
PS, is the picture for this fic accurate to their appearances? And please don't be mad if you already explained this.
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I try to put in filler to make them longer, but theirs only so much you can write.
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No. That's the only bimbo image I could find of the Mane 6. I want a little more variety and a tag bit less bimbo than the picture.
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Aright, thanks for clearing that up.
To variety!
I am okay with this fic
Though I'm a bit put off with the giant breasts and stuff, this is a pretty good fic. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but not much to truly be a nuisance. And the comedy in it was a pretty nice touch. Keep it up and hoping for some new chaps.
Question though: Will some ponies be genderbent?
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Besides all the spelling and grammar mistakes, there's potential! Will fave and watch for now.
6108210 you sir.....
You have given me nightmares.
I hope your happy now. :3
...seriously. I'm scared now.
I can't wait to see how A bimbo Fluttershy acts
6109418 Considering since he is Dragon Born and since Dragon's age slower then ponies, He's TECHNICALLY in the kid stages of Dragon hood and kids, both genders, think they are 'yucky.' But what do i know? I'm not the writer of this fic so i can't speak for them, only comment.
The people demand an update to the bimbos!
6111097 She'll probably have the biggest assets of the Mane 6. I call dibs on an I cup, if that's possible.
I like where this is going...
Tucker, what're you doing on my computer?
...
You were reading that bimbo story, weren't you.
...No?
You're not gonna tell Church, are you?
Why the hell would I do that? I never get to use the fucking sniper rifle, and there's no way I want to lose access to this!
That's... Actually a good point.
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Does this mean Ponyville is gonna turn into a brothel town?
While I found this chapter amusing, I can't help be feel that Spike has his priorities wrong if he's sleeping with his step-sister and his biggest complaint is that he'll be getting less sleep. Unless he has just fully accepted the inevitable in which case concern for side issues like sleep are understandable.
6115244 thats a good question that you raise there
6107928 You'd be surprised.
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6141321 Eeyup. I say he should just sit back and enjoy the ride (pun absolutely intended)
I trained myself in parkour and advanced movements, so my regular day if I were in Ponyville at this time would probably be hopping buildings and running from the horny mares. Just thinking about it......would be cool. Sorry, but I'm a adrenaline junkie, so crazy thoughts like that are common for me.
Well, for the real review. Meh, I'll give it 8.5/10
Keep up the awesome work!
Gold.