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May I ask, which one's next, or is it just topping this one
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The next girl will be Rainbow Dash.
Another excellent chapter.:D I still hope my theory of the princesses' suppression magic starting to crack, causing some guys like big mac or caramel or thunderlane to TG, forcing Spike to speed up his plans.
Perhaps that'd happen when getting to Pinkie. After all, being rushed is perfect for the energetic girl. XD
Spike's plan here seems to be "Distract her with lust," very similar to his plan with Rarity. And to be fair, it's not a bad plan. But it's surprising that that's enough. Applejack has ample time before the penetration to discuss protection with them, and Spike knew this, which is why he needed Big Mac to distract her from being able to have that conversation. But instead, Spike doesn't have to try and decieve Applejack at all, because she rolls with it without question. Applejack is even the one who takes initiative and decides which hole Spike is going to fuck her in. Thankfully, it's the orifice Spike needs to complete his mission. It's a lucky break for Spike. No distraction was ever necessary here, because none of them communicated their desires, they all just... fortuitously aligned.
You say that Applejack kept Spike on the edge, but you don't describe how she did this. Once again, this is a lucky break for Spike. If he blew his load from the handjob, he might not have enough left to impregnate her. If this was his challenge, he would have to find a way to advance the sex without seeming suspicious, and again, this is a time that having Big Mac as backup would be helpful. But this doesn't happen because it doesn't need to, because Applejack decides to advance the time at a moment that works well for Spike.
I like impregnation stories, which is why I'm coming out of the woodwork for this. But in the end, like the last chapter, it just doesn't feel like Spike is trying to knock them up. He just has normal sex with them, and the fact that he's able to cum inside them is less planning and more happenstance. The insistence on protection that Spike claimed the girls all had is once again nonexistent. So I feel like the problem is that none of the characters have goals or agency, they just have sex and everyone happens to get what they want even though they're supposed to have opposing goals (getting pregnant/not getting pregnant).
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Spike took Applejack's vagina because it was implied that she didn't want Mac too impregnate her by accident. Although now that I say that I realize that she didn't question the lack of concentration but automatically decided that Mac wouldn't have traditional intercourse and I admit, that's quite a big oversight. I also admit the excuses and plans that Spike comes up with are also very clunky and full of holes. Hopefully the next chapter will be different since I want to give it a competitive and very strenuous edge.
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"She didn't want Big Mac to accidentally impregnate him"
Yeah, but she probably didn't want Spike to accidentally impregnate her either.
"I want to give [the next chapter] a competitive and very strenuous edge."
There's no way you're not talking about Rainbow Dash. But I think competitive is good. Because Spike is in a competition right now. It should feel competitive. But these last two chapters... they've been played up like they were going to be a challenge for Spike, and then... they weren't.
Your sex scenes are well-written and fun, and I enjoy reading them. I just really want this premise to achieve its potential.
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She didn't want to Big Mac to impregnate her due to the inbreeding element.
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Right, she wanted Big Mac to impregnate her less, but she already didn't want either one of them to impregnate her, otherwise the "secret impregnate ponies" conflict wouldn't be a conflict. Plus, the fact that she was actively considering which of them would be worse to cum inside her meant that she was actively thinking about the possibility of Spike creampieing her, but decided "Eh, fuck it," and didn't bring it up. I totally get why Spike in her vagina would be preferable to Big Mac, but if she was trying to play it safe to avoid inbreeding, I figured she'd be trying to play it safe to avoid non-inbreeding pregnancies too.
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Yeaurite
6549280 That double entendre...
When it said it would contain incest, I was kinda hoping for yuri incest with AJ and her sister!? And Spike would end up impregnating them both.
Nice chapter with my favorite of the mane 6. Can't wait to see how Dash is gonna handle it.
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Sneak Cloud: Considering that this story is being made by this lovely author, you might get what you want.
I'm really enjoying these chapters. I can't wait until its Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy's turn.
A real workout? Seeing her just got AJ, it is safe to assume that Rainbow Dash is next. I'm still going with my original thought...Twilight will more than likely be last. Celestia and/or Luna may have to help with that. Fluttershy scares me, and Pinkie is an enigma.
You know, I'm really starting to think that the over all effect the rainbow powers had on the town didn't just effect the women. It seems to have ampted up the men's sex drive as well (wouldn't be surprised if there is some growth there to boot) it's just not as extreme as the mares.
6561368 Dangit, thanks to your pic Im now imagining Jessie turned into an anthro pinkie...
Bonus: Big Mac and Cheerilee.
Compared to before these seem rushed. I kind of expected Spike to manipulate Big Mac into it.
Big Mac was all for It I mean https://media0.giphy.com/media/124Q7jtnpRb5MQ/giphy.gif
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Well good of Equestria and princesses orders are pretty easy to understand especially when you probably have take over applejack chores every time disaster strikes. He probably heard about all her adventures with the girls and nobody would ever argue with celestial.