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Fluttershy, is there something you're not telling us?
While Celestia and Luna also share the blame where the hell else is it supposed to land? Hell, he should count himself lucky he wasn't castrated for it? And supposedly nothing, he literally smashed her wonderbolts dream, fucking unlubed assfuck.
Didn't he sabotage her birth control? It is not a dick move, it's well well well within reasonable response to hospitalize him.
"Hooray for my actions lacking meaningful consequences!"
"we like being used as fucktoys, tricked and manipulated, and knocked up against our will!"
Not a bad ending. Hope to see more in the future
Dragon, not lizard. He doesn't do the tongue thing.
You know how creepy that sounds, right?
Any more.
I Love it!
Lucky guy
hope to see more
At the start Spike look really depressed and now he's back in action!
Well, this was a fun little romp. Any plans for what's next?
I love that ending l, also don't you dare write about anything else other than spike getting laid this was awesome
I absolutely loved seeing Spike get so much action
Wow. That's really something unthinkable
Love every word of it. it has so many things i love. Spike, Bimbos, Spike making love to the mane 6, and impregnation.
Not sure Charoite is an actual word. Looked it up and couldn't find it on either dictionary or google translate.
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charoite
7309558 Thanks.^^
Amazing way to end it. Surprised 'Celly' and 'Lulu' didn't make braceletts for themselves for the event. XD Perhaps wondering how the others felt like.
It's been a glorious journey and a pleasure working with you. Thanks for this opportunity, and hopefully I'll see your work in that Featured box soon!
Um... How did the girls get de-bimbofied? Because, part of biology... When a woman gets pregnant her breasts, actually get bigger. Did you sleep, through biology class or something? Because if you did, than I'm not surprised you didn't know that.
Spike was like a BOSS. Though he should really thanks Celestia for saving his ass. On second thought, he has been doing just that once a month.
7309982 I'm guessing it has something to do with the Elements of Harmony. After all, they were what cause the girls to become bimbos in the first place. Maybe having a new life forming in their bodies somewhat cured it somehow?
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Yeah but the reversing effects the elements had shrunk their over-sized breasts into their normal-sized breasts which they had before the bimbofication. Granted they did enlarge during pregnancy and I have no idea why I'm reading so much into this.
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Okay, but even so how did the effects of the elements, get reversed? Was it that drug, Celestia gave Spike? Because nature dictates, that unless something has magic crammed into it, nothing can change the whole "boobs growing during pregnant" law. It's just nature, and logic. Plus, if the whole bimbofication process is caused by magic, wouldn't defeating their next big villain with whatever magic artifact they find next, just repeat the process? I just I'm just very confused.
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I kinda see it as the Elements are somewhat sentient things and reversed the bimbo effects after the heirs where born, ensuring the safety of Equestria. After this the elements won't need to make the wearers more enticing since they have already done their jobs. The only reason repeated use of the elements caused increased effects is because after multiple uses on multiple different enemies they would be seen as a larger threat, thus making the need for an heir more necessary. Sorry if none of that makes sense, I'm making this up on the go.
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Okay. Thank you, for the explanation. But, if you are considering a sequel, how about this... Something goes wrong with Celestia's litte bracelets, causing our nine beloved bimbos, to be... Well, bimbos for permenantly. This causes Spike to have an incredibly horny breakdown, and confuses the elements children. I'd really find it funny if they went to one of their kids and said, "Someday YOU'LL, look just like this, Honey." What do you think?
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Sounds like it could be fun. Probably not gonna do a sequel for a while though.
Amen brother. And hallelujah for summer!
Thank you for finishing!
Could we possibly get a prequel story, explaining full detail each of the mane 6 and cutiemark crusaders individual transformations?
This story was quite a tale and I often found myself checking the home site multiple times a day to see if there was an update. And how it came together full circle like some well written television drama was something worth being proud of. This was definitely something that I have looked upon for inspiration and will always suggest to anyone looking for a good clop to read.
Keep doing the best you can my friend.
I'm going to be perfectly honest here: I would have been much happier if this story just ended at "Goodnight Sweetie. Goodnight Rarity." He said, waving back to them.". Actually, everything past that effectively killed this story for me.
I genuinly liked this story. A quality plot-with-clop that surpasses many fics I've seen so far, with an interesting prompt (mane 6 need babies for new mane 6 because elements of harmony, mane 6 become bimbos to accomplish that, and Spike gets ordered to make all 6 pregnant), a delicious execution in both build-up (those first chapters were teasing as fuck) and actual cloppy parts (both the orgy-night and Spike's impregnation adventures), impressive characterization of Spike (coming realistically across as someone who really didn't want to do this, being afraid to hurt his friends and his relationships with them) and the rest of the mane six (especially how each of them acted after their kids were born, props for putting down such varied, fitting and realistic personas of would-be mane 6 mothers), and a sweet conclusion that follows the previous chapters (mane six were only bimbos to get pregnant, undone after they give birth) in which we get to see the logical result of what happened before; Spike now has 6 children (which he can't attend to all of them at once), the mane 6 behave like one would expect them to after everything happened to them, and Spike seems to have begun to grow as a responsible, thrustworthy father...
Yes, I liked the story, because after Spike literally turns down a full day he can spend with his child (on his mother's request, who actually hated Spike for what he did to her) for an actual twenty-four-hour-fuck-marathon with none other than the royal princesses themselves, my enthusiasm for this story got cold real fast. Oh, you wanted a Spike that learns to live as a father of six children with six different mothers, a respectable and capable Spike? Nope, sorry, turns out how much he liked to just screw with his bimbo-friends turned him into a sex-crazed macho (apparantly only a full 24 hours of fucking with 2 cum-enslaved slut-princesses (the mommy-daddy thing got cringy fast) can satisfy him now).
Even further, there is apperently even a bracer that turns everyone back to their bimbo-states, just like that, out of nowhere! Hell, I'm even wondering now if the elements had anything to do with how the mane six became bimbos in the first place (and thus eliminating the entire story that I loved so much), and that it was just instead two sisters who saw a big dragon cock and did all this just to get a piece of that. I mean, I would have bought it if you added this as some sort of extra chapter, as an alternate ending if you will, but to be it the actual end? No, sorry, I'm not dealing with this.
Apologies if I went in a bit of a rant here, and I realise that this probably isn't what you deserve either, but... well, I suppose that I just find it a bit saddening that such a well-crafted and praise-worthy story ends on such a (in my opinion, just to make that clear, I am only speaking for myself here) low note.
My opinion on everything before Spike went to fuck the sisters in this chapter, as well as all the other chapters is that this is still a fantastic story, make no mistakes there, but after that... I'm not gonna say that I expected better, since the whole Spike-visits-his-children part was what I expected and thoroughly enjoyed reading, but when you went on full clop-for-the-clop writing (what even is story), let's just say that I felt a genuine sadness that it ended like this.
To any other reader that managed to plow through my wall of a text here, feel free to downvote me if you think I'm a complete idiot or something, I honestly don't care anymore.
Goodnight.
7310127 Don't worry about making it up as you go, you did explain in previous chapters that the reason the elements were turning them into bimboes was cause the elements were trying to make them have children (Heir to the elements). So it actually make sense they were un-bimbofied after they succeeded in ensuring that they would have a host if the mane 6 were to perish. They are more capable to keep themselves and their babies safe when they are back to normal so its logical that the elements turn them back to ensure their safety. thumbs up
Thought explaining this in the actual story instead of the comment section would have been better.
Now to my personal opinion on the chapter. I feel sorry for those kids, their dad had the whole freaking day off and he only gave each of them a few minutes and a few words. Wtf happens when he does have chores or work to do? Do they go days without seeing their dad? I'm sorry Rarity but if you really think that's being a good parent then I don't wanna know how your family environment while growing up was though with parents that just come by one day and dump Sweetie Bell in your house and never come back I can't blame you
The next issue is Rainbow loosing her dream, WT-flying-F!!! You got pregnant on orders from the freaking PRINCESS, she's paying for the baby expenses and providing NANNIES!!!! Don't give me that crap that you can't be a damn Wonderbolt, many women make their carriers and raise kids. YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT MONEY OR NOT HAVING SOMEONE TO LOOK AFTER YOUR KID!!! SUCK IT UP, IF YOU DON'T BECOME A WONDERBOLT ITS ENTIRELY YOUR FAULT!!!!!!
I think that's about it, besides that I really didn't mind there wasn't that much clop. It was a fine conclusion though, I would had liked more explanation on how the bracelet works and how the others (Rainbow, Rarity and the CMC) who had no interest in him romantically just suddenly decided they were ok with going back to bimbo form and fuck Spike again. That part was schemed over to much and should be explain in more detail.
Good story man and thank for being diligent and actually finishing it, unlike so many authors who start something and then either cancel it or loose interest and let them die. You rock
huh...
sequel?
I liked this story and I am probably one of many who hope that your "maybe" will someday become a "definitely" as far as a sequel goes. Even if we have to wait a year before it starts I hope you'll consider the idea and brainstorm every now an then.
I'd settle for an epilogue for the orgy finale as an Xmas gift, but I you do decide on a sequel here are some thoughts.
1) I'd like to hear more about what each girl missed about being bimbos? Was it just the sexy bodies they had, was it that their bimbo bodies were better suited to taking all of Spike's dick rather than their normal bodies?
Was it the lose of their inhibitions? That would help Twilight deal with the whole they're basically siblings, and Fluttershy's shyness that you'd think would keep her from getting kinky.
Or does the transformations have other benefits, like for example Fluttershy's fatigue in this chapter. Would transforming restore her stamina and make her the energy to bang Spike despite a long day raising a child and tending to the animals. The same with Applejack, she would likely be tired from farm work. Transform then drag Spike into the barn for a "roll in the hay".
2) While the focus is on bimbo sex, I'd like to know if any of the girls are interested in having sex with Spike in their normal bodies. Maybe they want to try it without having their minds dulled or just see how much of Spike's dick their normal forms can handle. Half of it, three-quarters at most? And how much would the girl(s) and Spike enjoy using a smaller tighter hole?
3) As much as he girls love Spike, would any of them fall in love with him? Is there a girl of the mane six that would get jealous of the others or otherwise want to make Spike her official husband and father to more of her children?
4) Finally, what about background characters? Everyone must know what's going on with Spike and the girls. He's not attached to them romantically so would anyone want to get in on the fun? Cheerlee, Aloe and Lotus, Vinyl, maybe even Octavia or other fancy girls like Fleur de Lis and Sassy Saddles?
These are just some hopes I have for the sequel if you plan to make one. Take your time and let us know when ever you begin your next great work. Hope it's a sexy one. :D
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I'm sorry that his story didn't end in the way that you wanted it to end. I wanted to have it as a 'happy ending' and I thought the best way to execute that was to have things semi-return but also have the Mane Six not be bimbos for a majority of the time. Although I sincerely appreciate that you have been so bothered and have enjoyed my story enough to write that much. (I thought people only read this for the sex.) Anyway, I'm sorry that this story didn't finish the way you wanted it.
I was hoping the bimbofication would wear off after they got pregnant. The ending feels kinda out of nowhere but I've seen so much worse and I enjoyed this for what it was.
An enjoyable end to a fun story. I have to agree though that being a mom does not end a wonderbolts career though. With the assistance she is getting, from the crown, Spike, Scootaloo, and her friends, I don't see Rainbow having to give up her dreams and one day will be flying with the wonderbolts as Spike, Bolt, and Scootaloo sit in the stands watching a show as Spike points out to little Bolt on his lap, 'See Mommy? That's Mommy up there little guy!"
And since it's clop, I think the little re-bimbofication at the end was fitting. Good to see that it's not permanent though and only used for bedroom antics.
I would also like to see if all the girls missed a little bit of their time under the influence.
Twilight I can imagine would have been freaked out about the whole thing as it would be an antithesis to all that she see's herself striving towards. That she actually missed it a bit could explain her coldness towards Spike as she may have been soul searching trying to make sense of it. In the end I think she is mature enough to admit to herself that she inadvertently discovered that she not only finds Spike attractive on some level, but that she has a fetish.
It doesn't mean that she wants to become permanently a bimbo or make others bimbos, but that she found it enjoyable and that within the safety of her own home and ONLY with friends and loved ones that she can trust implicitly and who will never judge her or use it against her, she does like to partake in that kink.
I can see her tinkering with the bracelet and making adjustments, like allowing Spike to turn only one girl into a bimbo at a time or even adjusting the amount of 'bimbo' they become. She may even include Celestia and Luna into the spell (Faust knows that she'd have a lot of 'personal fluids' from the sisters to use as spell components) as part of a prank, or maybe her more uninhibited bimbo side does that for fun and Celestia and Luna find that the next time they come to visit they undergo some rather dramatic mental and/or physical changes for the weekend. She may even find herself intrigued and a bit aroused by some of the potions and experiments she does while "bimbo'd". Going over the potions and spells she played around with between sex sessions and discovering that her different view point while changed has some interesting insights. Wisdom from the mouth of babes as it were. Not a different personality, but with a different mindset comes a different way of looking at old problems that she never would have considered before leading to more bimbo experimentation with Spike.
tdlr: Twilight finds that bimbofication is her fetish and rather than bury herself in shame, embraces it and makes it work to her advantage.
Rarity could see that Twilight and some of the other girls don't mind it so much and take another look at it, being generous and giving it another chance. Some invitations to come over to help once again and it becomes a little bedroom reward to Spikey-wikey after a hard days work. She mainly incorporates it as a 'friends with benefits' sort of arrangement, still not a full relationship though as she may not be ready to enter a full commitment. A special treat for special occasions. Though if Twilight can make modifications to the bracelet a bit so that Rarity can choose how much her figure 'expands' I can see her having more fun with it trying out different outfits and experimenting with more plus size body shapes and the types of fashions that go with them. Creating new lines of fashion for ponies who are not skinny little anorexic supermodel wannabe's. Her bimbo self even showing to be just as creative with lingerie as her normal self is with dresses. Again turning what is normally a negative into a positive.
Rainbow on the other hand I don't see her ever doing it unless it's in another orgy like the one at the end of the story. She may even see it as a fun challenge to get Spike off with her normal self rather than her bimbo self. A competition against herself to drive the dragon to new heights using only her natural skills. All the while training and applying for the wonderbolts. Seriously, can't see her giving up even against overwhelming odds. I know she can make it.
Applejack being more open to the relationship as I believe you mentioned would not really see a need to use it too much, she's decided to be his spouse and she'll throw herself into that role as much as she throws herself into anything else she does. Though I do see her occasionally taking a nip here and there alternating between being a busty bimbo cowgirl riding her dragon till the cows come home, and saddling up and being ridden by her strong young cow-dragon as he tried to break in his sexy farm pony. But this is more something done on and off, not regularly.
And I like to believe that the transformation does invigorate the pony involved. So Fluttershy could actually come to look forward to it as a regular occurrence that after a hard day at work helping her animals and taking care of the baby having Spike come home and turning her. Energy and vitality re-entering her, washing away the stress and fatigue of the day. Then spending some time being the one babied by Spike, or engaging in pet play as that seems it would be her thing. The sex re-vitalizing her, so when it is time to change back she is just as well rested as if she had a long nap.
Pinkie would totally see it as a new way to party, and I can see Spike and Twilight having to convince her not to include the Cakes into the mix.
The girls can also spend more time raising the children together. So far Spike visits each one, one by one. But they can have Spike pick them up like a day care service and he takes care of them all together for a few hours a day in the castle as they grow up like sisters and brother together. It'll give Spike more time with all of them and give the girls some time to themselves for their own pursuits and occasionally save Equestria.
Anyway, fun story and I can't believe I just wrote all that. I over thought a clop story. Oh well, good luck to you and thank you again for this enjoyable romp.
7319474 Eh, no need to feel sorry, you can't please everyone. Like I said, I was only speaking for myself, and I agree that most people probably only read it for the clop, so it's not like you did something something awful.
I do have to wonder though... how long was that bracelet around? Were the elements of harmony really responsible for the "first" bimbofication of ponyville, or was that just a perverse plan of the royal sisters for which they created such a device (the bracelet) all along?
It really isn't clear here, since bimbo-Twi explains it like "cuz bracelet or something, ask princess" (which is also curious, since I remember her bimbo-version still being highly intelligent and able to explain it), so I am still curious.
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To be perfectly honestly with you I'm not that good of a writer and forget a lot of the stuff I put in previous chapters. If I was to make something up about how the bracelet came to be I'd say that Celestia and Luna with all their non-descript powers managed to harness the magical element from the Elements that turned the Mane 6 into bimbos and converted that magic into a jewel which, when touching Spike caused the bimbo magic to reignite to any women in a small radius. The reason Twi didn't explain that is because she was to excited or anxious about the impending orgy. I hope that makes some kind of sense.
7320872 Hmm. You've got some interesting ideas. Might have to come back to this if I write a sequel.
Best....clop....ever...
it took me a while but I managed to read it all, its a good story and I got much enjoyment out of it. Thanks for writing it and know that all your hard work has been enjoyed greatly....
Keep on writing, I'm going to go see what else you have wrote... Until next time! Bye!
A fitting end to a hot piece of clop that I've enjoyed quite a bit. It was cute with Spike being a caring father to his kids and at least being friends with their mothers, dating three of them too. It was hot with that session with Celestia and Luna inviting Spike over for "Royal Business". The bracelet rebimbofication was a nice touch at the end, along with Celly and Lulu wanting a piece of the action; Spike's got his hands full with 11 hot babes. My only complaint is Spike not keeping his size during his impregnation of Twilight, or just being a bit bigger, but it was still awesome overall. Keep on writing the way only you can, dude. We've all been there at one time or another with school.
if you make a sequel try to make the kids a little older like 6 or 9 years old.
Absolutely shameless...
Perfect.
Maybe in a later time, Spike could have a youngblood harem.
>"Now that I can't join the Wonderbolts because of you
-Name the reason 'why'. That's my challenge. Yes, the reason has to make sense with reality... Right now, it seems that some 'proper explanations' are lacking.
Because, really, the text doesn't 'say' that it's a *temporary* thing.
>"How am I gonna be a Wonderbolt and a mom at the same time? Not happening!" Rainbow hissed
-Ahh... Middle-finger to reality AND common sense, I see. -_-
Sigh. Being a mother *DOES* *NOT* prevent someone from having a career, whatever it's professional athlete or nuclear physicist !
I don't really like how Spike is accused of 'taking advantage' of the Mane 6 and the CMC. Sure, they weren't themselves, but they were still the ones who started it all. Celestia was the one who told him to impregnate them in the first place.
Good ending. Glad everything worked out. They can change whenever they want.
Why would Spike have to wear something? I would think it would be the mane 6. After all with what happened I would imagine they would be somewhat cautious and nervous and would like to be in control. If they feel it's getting out of hand they can take their own cellars off
After all Spike did take advantage of them being vulnerable and changed their lives forever without consulting them about it. They would not be so quick to put their absolute trust in him even if they agree to be bimbo's again at times.
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I agree. It’s complete bull that they blame spike for that when we all know they would say yes without a second thought if Celestia, Luna, or Cadance asked them. Besides, Celestia basically made him do it.