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Utahraptor


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A lone utahraptor is caught in a struggle to survive, he is a predator from late creataceous Wyoming. He lives day in and day out looking for food, water and sometimes shelter. He may be six foot tall and 10 feet long but he is not the largest dinosaur by a long shot. He is always on the run from the massive Tyrannosaurus rex. But an asteroid impact exposes a now unstable portal that has been long since kept under ground. The raptor falls in and ends up in a whole new world, and a whole new way of thinking. He ends up befriending a few of the people he meets, but what about enemies

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

The adventure side of the story starts to become present after chapter 2. I am in the process of writing chapter 2 and I am drawing out a story board for how the story will go in chapter 3. I have a feeling you will love it!

The second chapter is the last one told from Big Al's POV. Chapter three will be in third person omniscient. I hope you enjoy the new chapter!

I'm guessing the main cause for dislikes is the lack of adventure, well you need to build up to the adventure. If i just jump right in you'll wonder who the fuck is this other character. Be patient.

Funny, I'm using Utahraptor in one of my stories. lol

The irony is strong with this one.

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