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Figuring Yourself Out

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RaylanKrios

RaylanKrios #1 · Jun 10th, 2015 · · · Chapter Four ·

This is a weighty topic...you gloss over it far too easily. If you're going to write this kind of thing it needs to be done...well respectfully and this kinda isn't.

kaytisparklewriter

kaytisparklewriter #2 · Jun 10th, 2015 · · · Chapter Four ·

6075934 Well, I am sorry you feel that way but I am a bit confused as to why you think that. I do not think I "glossed it over" but that is entirely your opinion. I do however know that this is a weighty topic because I have had to deal with this sort of thing as well. I did not want to make it too heavy in the fact that this is my first time writing something like this and I am still young and this is about how it went for me, without the sexual activities. I just wrote the way I felt it should be written. I do hope you enjoyed it, regardless of you feeling it to be written disrespectfully.

Orphan

Orphan #3 · Feb 26th, 2018 · · · Chapter Four ·

U really need to work on your pace. Make it slower, build some sort of tension. Sexuality is an awkward and sometimes even dramatic topic to write about. Doubts run rampant and lack of acceptance is feared even after they said it’s okay. U make it sound a thousand times simpler than it really is, like reading a children’s storybook.