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The Diamond Cutters1,361 stories ·1,208 members

Magic Morphin Pony Rangers

five familiar fillies will be tasked with the most important job in all equestria, becoming pony rangers and defending all of equestria from evil.

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badninja

badninja #1 · Jun 14th, 2015 · · · pony rangers ·

The biggest thing I found was there was a lot of missing capitalization. Good job for a first attempt!

zzwolf

zzwolf #2 · Jun 15th, 2015 · · · pony rangers ·

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon as Rangers what type of drug are you on to think at those two would be a good idea for Rangers?

steastritz

steastritz #3 · Jun 19th, 2015 · · · Looming plans ·

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And for those who read the comments before the fic get a spoiler in the face

there is a reason for this black box you know.

Day Shine

Day Shine #4 · Jun 19th, 2015 · · · Looming plans ·

If anyone has any suggestion, please let me know. I want improve on my stories as best as I can. improvements, critiques, changes, fixes. let me know.