My Little Teenagers: Beaches are magic!

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The Summer Crew, (Dinky, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, Scootaloo, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Rumble, and Button Mash) decided to go to the beach. It was a sort-of good idea.

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theguysaidhi

theguysaidhi #1 · Jun 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Drink beach.

Nikkori

Nikkori #2 · Jun 8th, 2015 · 2 · 1 ·

6067791 What does that mean?

Wolffress

Wolffress #3 · Jun 8th, 2015 · 2 · 1 ·

Cute story. This was great! YAY!

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht #4 · Jun 12th, 2015 · · 2 ·

You were right, it did suck. I mean, your characters want to go to the beach for fun, and everything goes exactly as planned. There's no conflict, there's no direction, it's just boring.

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht #5 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · 2 ·

Why hasn't this been put in the Badfic Bin?

Nikkori

Nikkori #6 · Jun 15th, 2015 · 2 · 1 ·

6086688 It hasn't. And I'm glad about that. Oh, don't you have better things to do other than reading my stories and putting little hate-like things in the comment section?

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht

Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht #7 · Jun 16th, 2015 · · 2 ·

6097036 It's not really bad, it's just weak and boring. Your characters want to visit the beach, and everything goes exactly as planned. There's no conflict at all. Your grammar and spelling fails in certain areas, and your characters are relatively indistinguishable from each other. All we know about Button is that he's a wimp who loves video games. The others lack in any personality at all.
Also, if you don't want me to give you honest criticism, you shouldn't be here on this site. Go on Fanfiction.net where you'll get more praise for writing boring, soulless dreck.

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