• Member Since 5th May, 2015
  • offline last seen Aug 10th, 2015

CinnamonBun


Hello! Welcome to my Fimfiction page, as I am still learning and don't have much experience with story writing, My stories may not be immaculate. However, you dont know until you try! ~

Comments ( 6 )

Kinda confusing at the end but still funny :)

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Quite a good story, keep it up! I would suggest for your next one, add some more detail and expand the story more if you want to. For example, what is here could also be an interesting base for a bigger story (if you are interested in that).

Roseluck is one name, my uncultured friend.

Comment posted by ZheUbermensch deleted Jun 4th, 2015

6051844 Thanks for reading! I appreciate the feed back, and that's an interesting idea I will definitely consider, thank you :yay:

6051868 Haha, sorry about that, I hadnt really realized until now :twilightsheepish:

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