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The man who likes ponies but also likes monsters... so what's wrong with him combining the two? ;P


Roseluck wakes up to find herself trapped inside a strange underground facility. As she wonders through the facility, Roseluck soon realizes that she is being stalked by a familiar party pony, a party pony who isn't at all pleased to see her.

Note: This isn't a Cupcakes copy cat fanfic, so please give it a chance. Also if you favorite this story could you please give it a thumbs up. It just helps me feel good about my story and it helps the story get views. :raritywink:

The story was proofread and edited by: TheDizzyDan. He is a pretty awesome guy. :pinkiehappy:

An Audio Reading by Swift Blade can be found: Here.

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Comments ( 7 )

It's kind of anticlimactic. I think the section about "how this all began" could have been cut out completely, and Pinkie's explanation could have been a lot shorter.

7320744 Personally I thought it was important to show the reasons behind the antagonist's actions. Just throwing the "Their Insane" tag is not only pretty unimaginative but can be really annoying.

As for the explanation part I felt it was needed and therefore I included it but in truth it was originally going to be a lot longer.

I honestly didn't expect Pinkie to be the good pony here.

8000444 That is exactly what I was aiming for. I am glad it worked.

Swift Blade did a reading of this fic. If you are interested in listening to it, a link has been included in the stories description.

Whoa! Great job! I felt like I was watching an RPG Horror game. With all the halls, the lightbulbs, and flashlight. And the twist near the end! Oh my gosh! I feel like I was sitting in front of the TV watching YouTube, except without all the jumpscares! Great job! I love it. Wish it hadn't taken me so long to read it and it had just been collecting dust in my 'Maybe' folder.

10310853 Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. :twilightsmile:

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