The Lost Nightmare, and the Pony named Blazing Nova

by Vibrant Emotion

Chapter 14: Ending or is it just the beginning

'Chapter 14: Ending, or is it just the beginning'

Wearing a comfortable bed outfit "Well that was unexpected at least I found the truth." As Nova looks towards the night sky with a smile

As Eve looks at him while wrapped in a towel from her shower "What do you mean?" as she puts on some sleeping clothes that were once Luna's

Scratching the edge of his face before turning around to her "Well that my mom happens to be Celesta," As he holds a finger out "that the reason for the whole thing was due to my so called cousin so he can claim the throne" holding a second finger out "and the last one is because of him I was able to find you, and allow you to have a second chance." as he walks over to her

She softly sighs "You're right it was because of his shenanigans that the two of us can be together." as Eve hug him "Not only that you protected Equstera from facing Nightmare, and what could of been a demon invasion, but you were able to save a island from becoming a place of darkness to take root."

As the both of them make their way to the bed so they can rest "Well I have a feeling that this may only be a small start of something big." Nova points out before the both of them fell asleep

Outside of castle towards the frozen north a dark haze starts to swirl around a pitch black horn with the tip colored with red "Soon I will have revenge against those princesses, but all in due time, but for now be ready for my return because it will be your last day of your rule." As dark laughter fills the air around it.

Comments

[The unknown 123]

Can we have a sequel

[Vibrant Emotion]

7991341 I'm planning to but I'm having difficulty trying to get it started sadly.

[Bronze Inkwell]

Okay the chapters are way too short and if it's too short then people won't enjoy it.

[Vibrant Emotion]

8439555
I can understand your point, but this was my very first story that I was capable of finishing. Plus I'm not very good with how many words for a chapter unfortunately.

[Bronze Inkwell]

8439928
Well how about we help each other then?

[Bronze Inkwell]

8439928
Also the name of this is too long try making the names shorter but still is related to the story for example: instead of 'The lost Nightmare and the pony named Blazing Nova' it could have been 'Blazing and the Nightmare.' But that's just me.

[Vibrant Emotion]

8440097
Awesome!!

[Bronze Inkwell]

8440354
I have a Discord we can talk on but I need to know if you have an account first.

[Vibrant Emotion]

8440674
Umm I don't have an account. Were do I go to make one?

[Bronze Inkwell]

8440737
Get the app from Google play.

[Vibrant Emotion]

8440745
Okay I got an account now, and I decided to go with Vibrant Emotion.

[Bronze Inkwell]

8440844
Alright cool I will send you a private message real quick just hold on a sec.

[SaturatedBubble]

gave it a glimpse, some of the chapters are a bit short, but you got the core of it there! good read, i'll have to read the whole thing soon.