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"an immortal prince human"
.......nope
To TheAlternateUser, I went on paint and used that slanty brush to write it out. It's close enough to my real cursive, you could probably find out who I am with it. I then uploaded it to photobucket on an account (username Dauthdr, big surprise there), and will continue to do so for all chapters.
To Quantum Pie, my original plans called for Alekyen to be the destroyer of the human race, but I wanted there to be a human fighting on Ponyville's side. So, I changed the original Alekyen to Dauthdr, and created the character X. X was originally supposed to have been just a regular person, falsely imprisoned by a paranoid immortal dictator for treason, but I later decided to make X a prince and rename him Alekyen.
As for how the supposedly immortal humans could have died, giving room for ponies to become what they are, that will be discussed in one of the "negative chapters". But there may or may not be a hint about it next chapter... maybe...
Looking forward to future chapters!
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To be truthful, so am I... I mean, I already know what's going to happen, but it has a sense of finality once I publish it... lol
WHAT THE HE'LL MAN? you fucked up son! First you haven't done the protagonist's pov in several chapters, in those chapters was a six month time skip. Second you had rarity kidnapped during that time, and finally you spent AT LEAST THREE MOTHER FUCKING CHAPTERS AWAY FROM THE PROTAGONIST!!!! Seriously fix your shit BEFORE YOU CONTINUE.
YOU BROK THA RULES * smashes key board and screams*
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Alekyen is A protagonist... there is no real / absolute / main protagonist... in my writings, there is no real main character. The "point of view" goes between characters, but usually stays in omnipresent (also known as "God's eye") view... Alekyen is a symbol of humanity, and the fact that ponies have only ever had bloody wars when humans were involved... the moral of Discord's Lot being that humans are disgusting creatures who only think of themselves and who hurt others to get what they want, therefore we should live like ponies and love and tolerate (congrats on those who already do)... As far as I am concerned, I have broken no rules...
797727 I get what your trying to say but you still shouldn't have done a six month time skip without updating on all of your OCs. Especially the one(s) who are seen as "good" ( who're usually the characters the readers support.). It causes readers to lose interest in the story because the character they ally themselves with morally seems to have been forgotten by the author. If this happens the story quickly becomes a grind to read. It happened to me when I read the novel 'Inkheart' and I REALLY don't want a repeat of that. I say this because the story is promising, I loved the beginning. I want to help you keep the readers interested ( I fall into this category) and I want your story to be the awesome story it has the potential of being!
797727 Also how did you not pick up on the Nova reference? I mean he has videos in the 'featured' section of YouTube!
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I thank you for your concern, but you should have been a little less "aggressive" in your comment... the six month thing was something I had already decided (remember, I already jumped about a year between Alekyen's arrival and Rarity's ponynapping), mostly because nothing really happened... I mean, sure, the cutie mark crusaders went to school, but do I really have to tell you what they did every single day? That would be worse than not developing the characters (I am developing them, I just needed a bit of a buffer)... starting next chapter, I'm holding off on the wasteland part of the story (it get's summed up in a later chapter), but I'll have about five years worth of time to develop my characters... but don't worry... whenever a new disciple of Discord is released, he'll get a bit of "airtime"... Also, could you please explain the "Nova" reference? I only really go on YouTube to watch ponies...
799771 ( the Chanel 'uberhaxornova' he's got some funny shit on there)
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... (Clears throat)... Yeah, I'm probably not gonna look that up... I'm probably not going on YouTube until season three... lol
799934Meh * shrugs shoulders* if you're ever board w/o anything to do ya might want to check it out.
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I'd rather read manga... I'm reading one I've never read before... It's been complete for a while, but I haven't had the chance to read it yet... So I'm reading it now... Instead of writing chapter six like I should be doing... *ahem*...
I will leave a comment because i am cool. Shame that no one seems to like this story. Tbh, i stopped reading this around chapter 5 but remembered this story and had a look-see to see if the story was still here.
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Well, if you want to keep reading, I've got another 5 chapters up!