Read some great stories, and couldn't help but think up one of my own.
Part of the Meanwhile... verse... well I guess that's one way to put it.
Anyways, you don't need to read Meanwhile... to read this. In here I delve into the history of the three pony tribes and why things ended up the way they did.
I modified the cover art. It's originally from Icognito-chan on Deviant Art.
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First of all, I really like your story. I think it does have a good potential and you could expand your vision of the old equestria.
Tough I think there is some grammar faults, it's no big deal.
In sum,keep writing , I love it
Interesting idea. Grammar aside, I do feel that this whole chapter could have simply been expanded upon and told from (maybe) somepony's perspective. Saying where each tribe stands with one another, and how they feel, is fine and all, but actually painting us a picture can go a long way to keeping people interested in a tale. I like what you've done, but it would be neat if we focused on multiple protagonists. Maybe one from each tribe? Of course, that's more of a personal taste of mine, I'm sure you have a good idea of what you want to write. Keep going!
6594408 This is just an offshoot of my main story, I do have plans to expand the character base quite a bit in this one. Platinum will be the main character. For now however, I'm working on my main story as it's nearing some pretty emotional things if I write it right.
Unfortunately, for me, my grammar is horrible.
Thanks for checking out this story though.... hmmm I probable should put it on Hiatus. Yeah, I'll do that till I get past this hurdle I got to do with my main story.