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Brony serving in the USAF. Love MLP and hopefully start popping out fanfics as soon as possible.
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don't give up on this story
Whooo! Keep up the good work!
Try listening to Ensiferum. I like their songs.
If you try using German, please get it right. Hand Machine would be "Handmaschine". "Die Industrieller" is wrong grammer, "Die Industriellen" or "Die Industrielle" would be right (depending on context). And ist "Deutsch", not "Deustch".
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Ok ill change the errors. Love the german language so thanks for the corrections.
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its like a mix between german and norse metal
Rache für das Vaterland!
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Why do you bother reading my stories if you dont get the bigger picture. Han understands Sunset Shimmer and doesnt go by what she did in the past but who she is now. That has Sunset Shimmer liking him because of his trusting nature.
5886213 Deleting comments is childish and proves you can't take criticism. And I you're going to completely disregard anything I say, so I'm not gonna bother.
It's fun reading this story, 'cause I'm currently learning german in school and I understand most of the basic words, so I can read little tid bits and get the gist of what they're saying. Fun way to practice my german reading skills.
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Your comments isnt criticism.
Just annoying spam that i feel doesnt need to be seen.
And thats good. I suggest you dont say anything else because all you do is keep talking shit. I dont appreciate it. Heres a hint:
If you think you can do better, you go write a fanfic.
Ill read yours and see whether its better than mine or not.
I don't understand what everyone has against your stories. They're AWESOME!!!
I hope you make a next chapter!
I just rewatched the movie. I think the Rainbooms should defeat the dazzlings, but with a little bit of alterations.
I don't know, maybe make some changes? Whatever comes to mind, it's up to you.
Question: Does Han and his friends get to do a victory song when the story ends?
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Ok ill probably let the Rainbooms win for this.
Hmm, I was thinking that Die Industriellens should defeat The Dazzlings.
The battle begins with the Rainbooms song, but when the spirits from The Dazzlings are loose and overpowering the Rainbooms that's the moment where Die Industriellens should step in along with Sunset Shimmer. They play the song from "My past is not today. Written by Han and Sunset Shimmer.
She then gets her 'Phoenix magic' to defeat the dazzlings.
Well that's the idea I had. It's up to you.
Good luck!
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That sounds promising ill probably add that
don't let the douchebags get to you dude just write what You want.
keep at it dude
Bloody hell that was awesome! Why would people dislike this?
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Because when people review it, they critique it like they know what they are talking about.
They like to talk shit and downvote the crap out of it.
I had a blast! Bwahahahahaha!!!
I want moar!!!
Han was like 'ugh'
I suddenly want to learn germanic language. Maybe, start with insults first. Bwahahahahaha!!!
Nicely done!
Schön gemacht!
I've been learning german! Yaaaay!
It's awesome that I got to translate some german words here.
Ko when's the next chapter I want to know what happens next.
What does Die Industriellen mean in English?
5953436 What does the writing in your avatar say?
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The Industrialists and writing?
you should change that into "der Gerät"
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My keyboard cant type deutsch
6514325 http://www.lsa.umich.edu/german/hmr/schreiben/umlaute.html
Ja geil! Ein song von heldmaschine hätte ich jetzt nicht gedacht. Gut gemacht! Ich hab sie schon mal live gesehen sind voll geil! Aber zurück zur Geschichte: bisher fand ich die ganz geil. Auch wenn mich die deutschen Sätze verwundert haben. Aber sonst top!
In english: great! I wasnt expecting a song of heldmaschine! Well done! I saw them live once and their great but nothing against Rammstein. Well to the story: till now: great. Had a bit of trouble with the german sentenses but everything else is great!
Oh and sorry for my Bad english!
\m/
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Danke!
KO a bit sexy and a weird music contest but it's cool.
Will Adagio be riding anyone in this story? What about the other two Dazzlings?
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She already ridden Han but I guess rape doesnt count lol. As for the others, it is already implied they were riding M Shadows in one of the chapters.