This is my OC's story. Its on DV art as well. People seemed to like it so i'm posting it here. You want to know more you must READ (. )( *)
Also if you read this and dislike it I would like a reason why. be honest
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625276 Are you fucking serious? Take your spam shit somewhere else.
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thanks for yelling at the spammer. I deleted his/her comment. I hope you like the story
626308 Thanks. I read your story and I must say while it isn't bad there are a few things you can work on. Like the fact most of this story is a huge block of text, try and make paragraphs more frequent but not too frequent. I recommend just reading other fics on this site to see how they're formatted. The story isn't the most original but it has potential, try and get a pre-reader/editor. They help a LOT.
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ok. I originally had this on DV art and people seemed to like it so i posted it here as well.
626552 People on deviantart, no offence to them I love that website, aren't always the best with stories. A lot of them know their art well but not story formats and stuff. On this website you will get a a lot of people who do know what they're talking about so in that case this website is better for honest opinions.
oh well i hope you continue
Novanplz here, in my identity as Castor. Excellent work!
And good luck on the rest! 
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I will. thanks
626861 thank you
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thanks
626874 No prob!
cant wait for the next chapter
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nice to see someone on here who likes it. and thanks for the fav
Certainly an interesting fic, though I'm curious as to what exactly is going on here, which is definitely a good thing.
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thanks. I really need to get the next chapter out but in a mix of being grounded,writers block, and sheer lack of motivation its not comin along to well
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Same happened to me on pieces of time, but I have another story which is much more enjoyable, considering leaving the story up for the sheer fact that it's my first (EVAR!!) story...
Ow.
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yeah
Moat please!
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thanks. kinda grounded atm but i will try to get more up. btw your comment made me grin
Good chapter
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thanks. and thanks for the fav