After reading through the letter, Twilight was nervous with the stallion. Was he some sort of criminal? What did she mean by 'similar'? Though, she was given orders.
'This must be important,' Twilight Thought. 'I better get everypony out of here, just gotta act normal'
"So what's is say, Twilight?" Spike asked.
"Oh, it's nothing too important. Celestia said that she'll be coming here soon to greet our guest." Twilight said as she trotted to the door. "Say, why don't we all take this chat outside while we wait for the princesses to arrive."
"Wow Twilight." Rainbow spoke. "I didn't know an Egghead like you can learn how to loosen up. You always go to 'Perfection Freak' mode if the princesses come. What's the deal?"
"Well, if you must know, I can relax too Rainbow Dash. I just thought it would be nice to be outside for a bit." Twilight Replied. Also a bit irritated about the 'Perfection Freak' name earlier.
Unknown to everypony, Shadow have been listening to the conversation from the start.
'There's something going on and I don't think this 'Celestia' person isn't coming just for a visit' Shadow Thought.
"Hey girls," Getting there attentions. "I think it is a good idea to go outside. It's a sunny day out there and I think we could enjoy the nice breeze."
"Wait," Rarity spoke. "I don't want to cause a delay, but none of us have gotten your name."
"Oh, where are my manners? My name is Shadow the Enderpony."
'Enderpony? Now where did that come from?' Shadow Thought. 'I'm an Enderman! I haven't been in this place for a day and starting to change already. Well, more than I already am.'
Shadow walked passed Twilight and went out the door. When he got out, the door slammed shut right behind him.
'I knew something was up from the beginning.'
Before Shadow could teleport inside, a beam came out of nowhere and exploded in front of him. He turned around and saw two different ponies.
"Stay where you monster!" Celestia Demanded. "Who are you and what are you?! I can tell that you are no ordinary pony!"
"*Gasp* Me?! A monster?!" Shadow Teased. "Why would you say such a thing? Did I forgot to bow for you glory?"
"Don't you speak such vile to my sister!" Luna Shouted. "Thou won't be so mighty after you're vanquished naïve!"
Luna charged up her horn an fired a lightning bolt straight a Shadow and exploded. When the smoke was cleared, both royal sisters looked on shocked that there was a crater, but there was no monster. There was a sound behind them, Shadow teleported out of danger in a blink of an eye.
"So, you want to fight a monster?!" Shadow yelled in anger. "Well, you got yourself a Mob Brawl!!" *SSSCCCRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEECCCHHHH*
Faster than anypony can act, he swung both his front legs right at Luna and repeatedly slammed her into the ground. He would have ended her right there, if a beam hadn't struck Shadow in the back. That made him even angrier as he teleported in front of Celestia, a few feet away from her. Before Shadow can throw another attack, he looked around to see a crowd of ponies that watched the entire fight, looking both amazed and terrified.
'What am I doing?' Shadow Thought. 'I'm suppose to be on their good side not the other way around. I know what I must do.'
To Celestia's confusion, Shadow sat on his haunch and put his front hooves behind his head.
"I surrender, and I apology for causing disturbance to the peace." Shadow Declared. "I am ready to accept my faith, as I nearly took an innocent life by my aggressive actions."
The crowd of ponies looked on confused and shock at this new-comer's behavior. Some started muttering to each other.
"Who is this stallion?"
"Did you see that fight?!"
"He took out one of the royal sisters in seconds!"
"Why is he surrendering?"
"Does he like muffins?"
Celestia looked on as Shadow closed his Ender eyes and lowered his head, ready for his demise. Normally, Celestia would have rid of any threat that harm her ponies, especially her sister. Except, there was something odd about this pony that she finds interesting. He might of started to fight royalty, but he also immediately gave up and turned himself in for causing harm to somepony like Luna. Thankfully, Luna only gotten a minor injury. Maybe, a few bruised ribs and bumps.
"Guards, please take Luna back to Canterlot and put her in the West Wing Hospital." Celestia ordered as she walk towards Shadow.
The royal guards saluted and did as they've been ordered. Celestia stopped right in front of the Enderpony, as Shadow look up still waiting for his punishment.
"Who are you mysterious stallion?" She Asked. "And what are your intentions in Equestria?"
"...My name is Shadow the Enderpony your highness." Shadow finally spoked. "And my intentions are to make peace with this land's inhabitants, but out of anger, I attacked royalty and caused emotional distress to you subjects."
Celestia thought for a second, then smiled as the Mane 6 finally came out.
"Shadow the Enderpony, I here by decree that you shall be... pardoned for you actions." She Declared. Everypony and Shadow looked at the Princess of the Sun with confusion.
"However, for causing disturbance to the community and minor injury to my sister, you must do community service for 2 months to recover from your accidental crime. Do you accept?"
Shadow thought for a second. "I accept you offer your highness."
"Very well, you will also be looked after by the Elements of Harmony as you live among one of them." Celestia turned to the 6 mares. " Can you handle this task?"
Twilight spoke. "Of course Celestia, you can count on us for this task."
Celestia smiled as she's ready to take flight, when she turned around towards Shadow.
"And Shadow," Shadow leaned closer. " Welcome to Equestria. Try to stay out of trouble." She smirked as she took flight towards Canterlot to check on a certain Princess of the Night.
My only problem was that it moved too fast. Some parts were too short, and I have questions and comments: 1-What did Celestia think he was, and why did she just attack him? 2-Im pretty sure that trying to find living arrangements would take waaaaay longer 3-Where the hay is science Twilight? Remember how she was with Pinkie? I'm pretty sure she wouldve gone crazy about Shadow just existing ._. But other then that, great job and keep on writing!
6067757 Well, for you first question, Celestia thought it would be an old foe. Remember, this is before "The Crystal Empire" episode. She thought that Shadow could of been one of Sombra's minions. Shadow does look similar to one. And yes, I'm adding minions to the episode.
Second question, I thought it would be good for Shadow to have some place to live, but he still has to gain the trust of the citizens of Ponyville. So, it's going to be a rough road for our friend here.
For your final question, "Science Twilight" will come soon when things calm down after the fight. I'll probably add that to the next chapter. He'll explain almost everything about MInecraft or Craftia. Which ever comes first.
I'm still trying to figure out which pony would Shadow be with. It's either Luna, Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy, or even Chrysalis when she comes back.
I find this story very interesting but in a couple parts when you say "your" or "you're" you just say "you" for some odd reasons, they're probably be some more mistakes that is one I saw quite a lot but either way I still enjoyed it and excited to see what comes next
Honestly, did she really knew this because of what Twilight has written? Shouldn´t he be something new to Equestria?
It is werid that Celestia wants to battle him that fast.
6067757 i agree with him/her here, you could have explained a few things better, or have written a little scene with Celestia, and what everyone thought about him, or at least the pony which is going to be his romance.
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while this is your story, and there is no real rule for Celestia, and how she should notice and possible Enemy, but i am not sure if that what Twilight told her, would be already enough to think of the worst.
that is okay, but she should probaby apologize as well, i am not sure how bad it was, but they tried to attack him as well, even befor they were sure, but you said they thought he would be bad, and he did beat one of them.
The story is gettig better, i am not sure if some of the things i noticed in this chapter, are really mistakes, or just personal preference, but i just tell you what i think i found.
What thaaaa buck?
Wait seriously? They attack him and call him a monster, despite that he didn't do anything, and HE apologizes to THEM, and all is forgiven JUST LIKE THAT. That is WAY to rushed, and just weak
6403775 maybe they knew what he was and paniced
I would not back down on the sisters. I'd keep fighting them no matter what if they threw the first punch.
How sweet is derpy
Well that's not very nice. I've always thought Luna was quite a decent pony, innocent too.
Okay! What the Hell! They attacked him first without even giving him a chance he isn't in the wrong! You are Celestia you ass!
Okay first Celestia and Luna were in the wrong and he should have been really angry at them or at least the problem shouldn't have been resolved so quickly.
I can forgive spelling and grammar.
But they attacked him.
THEY ATTACKED HIM.
*braindead from massive amount of errors.*
They attacked him and called him a monster and there was no trial and yet after HE surrendered they punish HIM? That is not right.
Is there a legal system in this Equestria? The Princesses attacked first, and then punished him. Seems like there's either no legal system at all, or Celestia and Luna are corrupt twats.
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I know, I know... I messed up a little there. I should of taken some consideration about details and other stuff.
No screw you Celestia you attacked me anf.xallwd me a monster! You preform community service and go suck a carrot! Why is it always the main OC who is in the wrong when they just go off and attack without a second thought?!