well here some help
"Destroy it. The object we seek is a mask that will corrupt and infect this world with a twisted cybernetic mind, robbing every sentient being on this world of their free will if not found and destroyed before it can be used. If it is ever put on, it will be the damnation of this world. We must find it and destroy it."
the ones in blue i would recommend an alternative word to take their place a thesaurus would help in that. As for the red you might consider getting rid of it all together since you've stated the same thing twice already in the previous sentences.

As for you felling off about this chapter i would have to agree the flow of it just seems different compared to the first two in some way and the flow of a work is something i myself have struggle with so... Although i can tell you've lost a bit of your descriptiveness in this chapter to a degree the only advice i could give about that would be to reread the previous chapters you wrote and see the differences.

The last bit of advice would be the obvious of get an editor but since that could take a bit the most helpful thing would be for more people to get involved at this point

6044076 yeah. I think the moving across the country threw off the flow I had going. I may go back and revise this chapter later on, and I definitely need a pre-reader. I do want to move on with the story, but I'm just not really sure about the most recent chapter. I may go back and see what I can adjust. Well, At least the story is coming along. Thanks for the advice though. I appreciate anything that helps my story.

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hey no prob

Please update soon.

Good chapter, friend