Glad there are some folks who like this. I know its not the best (first MLP fic) but I'm glad to see a few people like it. The ones who disliked and didn't say why I figure are just the "view title, down vote" Not fond of that. Message to those people. That doesn't help! I do want suggestions and creative criticism if any other authors have suggestions. Or tell me what you like. I'm going out of town so updates may not be for a few more days, but let me know if I should keep this going. Thanks everyone

Keep at this looks promising i would like to see where you head with this.

Ahhh, the Guillotines. One of the best weapons in the game.