Daring do and Paragon Apple wake up in a sticky situation. Who is Paragon apple, what do the want with the pony's skill, and what is his true power that the bandits would want him so bad.
I'm just your run of a mill brony/gamer who has a big imagination, but is forgotten as fast as it's created.
Daring do and Paragon Apple wake up in a sticky situation. Who is Paragon apple, what do the want with the pony's skill, and what is his true power that the bandits would want him so bad.
Make the chapters longer and proof read. This cannot be emphasised. Here is a top when proof reading. Read out loud. If something sounds wrong, correct it.