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Oscar is a homeless pony who is always getting into trouble. Can he make it out of this one? Or will he make a career and meet that special somepony along the way?

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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx #1 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

One, no backstory whatsoever to what's going on, and what kind of pony name is "Oscar"?. Two, significant grammar errors and it's a wall of text.

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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx #2 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

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I have no idea what that is supposed to mean.

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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx #3 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

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Oh. I thought he was being all philosophical or something.

CarnationStar

CarnationStar #4 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

634560 Actually Oscar is an OC pony I made for a different project which failed and was trashed. I thought I'd recycle him in a 'scarface' sort of way, I'm sorry about the first person, I don't really like second or third person writing. .634097 Thanks I'm really new to writing pony fanfics. I'm more into writing totally original stories from scratch.

dragonshy14