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When Fluttershy breaks her wing, Rarity offers to take care of her. Feeling come to the surface and the two start a relationship. Will they be able to make it last?

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Oooh! I didn't think you were going to publish anything, but I glad you did! You can certainly make it to the saccharine disgustingly cute romance bits a lot faster than I can! :raritywink:

I'm glad that you took the classic "Someone gets hurt. Fluttershy stays with them" trope and turned it on its head. Because that's been done to death, brought back to life, and done to death again.

And I know this story is rated "Everyone," but why does that last line sound so . . . uh, suggestive? Maybe my mind has just gotten more messed up from reading too many romance fics on this site, but that was the first thing I thought of when I saw that bit. :fluttershyouch:

I do have some notes for you, but I'll take those up with you via PM.

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