• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2014
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Dante K Freeman


All anyone needs to know is that I've been in love with creating characters and storied since I've been very little. Lately I've been getting into the pony community, so here I am.

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On the day of Fluttershy's birthday, Twilight has the idea to through a large party as a sign of appreciation to the kind mare, not Pinkie Pie, no need for shock. When she goes to check on the preparations, she finds that things aren't going as planned, big shocker. To make matters worse, Twilight soon discovers that the party preparations are the least of their problems.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 1 )

Cute fic. :raritywink: Very nice work with the characters! The story, albeit a bit disorganized, nails the comedy of the show. I could go on to explain the minor grammatical errors and slightly strange way this is formatted, but it didn't distract me too badly. All in all, I think you did okay. I'm enjoying it so far. I'll look past the dints and admire the artwork. :twilightsmile: can't wait to see what's to come!

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