I am a strange teenage guy who has been a brony for almost two years. I find clopfics funny and twilight is best pony. Hope I can find lots and lots of new friends.
Twilight Sparkle, recently made princess, is now trying to get away from ponyville for a while and have a relaxing vacation. But when things don't go exactly the way she expected, her perception of reality is soon turned "dark". (This is a crossover between My Little Pony and Alan Wake, one of the best horror games ever made.)
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Could need an editor in some places, but not bad overall. I'm also a huge fan of Alan Wake and like what you did so far. Gonna watch closely.
5696579 Thanks man, I need all the help I can get right now
... seriously? You give them flashlights and guns, but a handy is too much to ask for or what?
5705349 Was that suppose to be a joke or is there an actual problem with that?
5705547 Sort of a joke, though it kinda doesn't sit right with me. I get it she wouldn't need a phone because of magic, but does her horn really has to vibrate when she gets a "call"?
5705612 Well, I couldn't really think of anything else at the time, so I thought that was the most appropriate. Also, this is before rainbow rocks, so she doesn't have the book phone. Also, the don't have hands, so that would technically be called a hoofy.
Still nice. Kinda miss collecting the thermos, but thats just me being nostalgic. But you once call her revolver a pistol and say she fires a whole clip. While the pistol part is debatable, a revolver has a chamber that can be emptied, not a clip.
5747418 Sorry
5748266 It's OK. Kinda makes me feel like being a proofreader.
Well I'm suprised pinkie doesn't have powers to predict things here
6015282 There's something strange and really wrong with the town, so its screwing with her Pinkie sense.
Should be how. Also nice this story is back. Really like what you make of the original storyline. As well as what you made of agent Nightingale I think his name was. Thank you for continuing this story.
7485042 yeah, I just need to stop being lazy and actually write these
This is great i can't wait to meet the "Dr. Hartman, Odin and Tor characters" I hope this story isn't cancelled. If it is i'll be sad but understanding. And if this Story is dead plz change the tag of "Incomplete" to "Cancelled". Though i'll hope this story isn't dead. I love this MLP and Alan Wake crossover