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Imagine if everypony in Ponyville heard Granny. That'd make things...Interesting.
Am I gonna find errors here too?
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I hope not. But I can't be 100% sure.
I came for the sex and stayed for the story. Hilarious is what this is.
Oh, there are always loopholes my friend
Otherwise they'd be...Banned from Equestria Daily
Hmmm nothing I can see on my phone...
Also at this rate they gonna be banned from sexing anywhere.
wow...
If your goal was to make me want to beat Rarity with a lead pipe, then you've accomplished that. She had no right to say ANY of the things she said to Applejack. It's understandable that Rarity isn't happy about missing Applejack's wedding day, but guilt tripping Applejack over it and wanting Twilight to annul the marriage just so they can do it the way Rarity wants it, that's downright disgusting.
So Rares and Granny were angry, cause they couldn't see AJ getting married... another reason why this "offscreen"-Wedding was a BS Idea (thankfully they will do a Wedding in Ponyville)
My favorite Part was Granny Smith at the End
This is way funnier than it has any right to be.
Twi needs to hurry up with that sound-proofing spell, before they're banned from getting it on ANYWHERE in Equestria
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Why? She wants to witness the Marriage between two of her Friends, she would still want them to be together
The poor newly weds can't get a frapping break.
I want him back Mine!
I want him to LOVE ME!
I want his party popper !
Wut ? He's that awesome ! , I want him too !
He's wut size ?
Let's get out cutie marks !
Let see. . .Equestrian herding law PC 12-PV 1223 a-34-c A stallion can have as many mares he can support in a healthy condition & number of healthy offspring produced. neat. idea!Yay!20% more awesomeCupcakesWut? Ah gota share?
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Ah, poor Rarity. So often misunderstood. Now I know how the show writers must feel sometimes. It's not about the way she wants to do it. It's about summing up what all of their friends and relations had to go through when they were confronted with the finalized deal.
That being said, Rarity's way of expressing her dissatisfaction wasn't ideal. But flaws in a character are just as important as virtues. Rarity certainly is a flawed character, but that's what makes her so appealing to me.
HA! Dat ending!
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OCO? What is that supposed to be?
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Funniest comment so far.
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For some reason that stood out as the most funny part to me.
Naughty, OCO means hollow in Portuguese. So I want to do an hollow at AJ's ass. Search for "Pai de Familia" for more information. (If you want)
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Huh. The stuff you can learn on the internet.
5607102 What you mean?
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Well, now I know the Portugese word for hollow, and I know the name of a Brazilian gay porn actor. I don't know if that knowledge is ever gonna be relevant in my life, but you never know.
Another fun chapter careful AJ, you might end up confined to a very narrow range of movement around Ponyville if this keeps up. Then again... you could also, shall we say, rent out your and Spike's 'services' for animal control purposes
And so the real problem comes out... There's definitely a selfish dimension to their objections, but this is a community that prizes, well, community above all else. Spike and AJ seem to have forgotten that.
Either this is building to a lovely re-wedding ceremony where everyone will cry tears of joy, or to a bitter conflict about whether marriage is for the benefit of the individuals involved or about affirming your place in the community. *Looks up at the story tags* I'm gonna put my money on option 1.
Ha. Oh I pray Rarity heard them. That would be too funny. And when AJ goes to talk to Rarity about the dress she can't look her in the eye and AJ just knows then smile with a cocky grin. I wonder in this story is Celestia like Spike's mother if so I can't wait for her to get the news about Spike's marriage lol.
PS. I am wonder are you still working on that 'Weeds' inspired story. I have been really looking forward to reading it.
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It's great that you want to keep Rarity in character by being a diva, but my point that Rarity had no right to say what she said still stands. By not having Applejack argue back or point out that Rarity is giving her grief over something she has no say in, it paints Rarity's selfish behavior as being in the right and that is what is holding this chapter back in my opinion.
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Again, Rarity has every right to be upset that she didn't get to be apart of Applejack's wedding. That still doesn't change the fact that Rarity has no right to be angry at Applejack, talk down to Applejack's spur of the moment decision to get married and say that it was wrong, and most importantly, SUGGEST THAT THEIR MARRIAGE SHOULD BE ANNULLED so that they can have another ceremony the way Rarity want them to.
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I'm really not sure what story you're referring to here.
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Hm, you make some valid points there. But then the argument would have spiraled out of control, instead of heading towards a resolution. Plus, it is in character for AJ to give in. Firstly, when Rarity brought up her family, AJ realised that this had far bigger implications than she initially thought. Also AJ was the first to apologize after their fight in "Look Before You Sleep."
And I'd say AJ got back at Rarity with the bragging. It's not really about Rarity being right, it's about getting AJ to start thinking about the issue, and that realization in the moment was more important than arguing back.
Anyway, I'm sorry if you didn't like the chapter.
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Paulo Guina is not gay, only Jailson Mendes is. Paulo only did the movie "Big bears, furry and gentle" for money. He has 2 daughters, and he is married. Anyways, he still do OCOs.
5607223 Oh i thought we were thinking about doing a story where AJ is going to start to sell weed to support the farm and Spike was going to end up helping her. I might have been talking to another author sorry
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We meet again.
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5607340 Yes we have -wind blow my hair dramatically- But this time I will win.... THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!!!!
hi
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Yeah, you must have been thinking about someone else then.
On a personal level, I can understand where this story is going as I been through something like this myself.
Still it was an interesting update to a great tale.
Here's hoping that the married couple could have a new "house" to live in to complete their marriage ?
I also wonder how Twilight would feel about doing a marriage ceremony again given what happen to the last wedding the Mane 6 went to ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
Well...There's plenty of rooms in the Crystal Castle
Send them to Fluttershys they can get rid of the Everfree Forests predictors nearby her house.
The castle of two sisters is vacant. And nopony but Zecora would bother them there.
5606841 Especially if Sweet Apple Acres was the unofficial make-out zone of Ponyville.
dear lord! this chapter had me rolling. I mean yeah, Rarity was kinda out of line with the guilt trip, but the chapter itself was hilarious! great job
5608333 naww then maticros and timbier wolfs will crash there
It's really weird to me when people say Spike hit a growth sprit doesn't feel right.
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Good ol' Granny Smith.
5609075 a little breath-o-fire takes care of them. and considering what happens when Spike climaxes, No problem mon'.
amazing chapter, I can't wait until the next one!
Well... They could consider the age old tradition of breaking in friends homes.
5607418 And where exactly is this story going? 'Cause I am a bit lost.
Loving this story!
I am going die!
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I think it's going with Twilight and the others understand the married life between Spike and Applejack.
Oh, what I forgot to mention... I like the Naming Theme of the Chapters... makes me kinda guess where AJ and Spike would fuck in this Chapter.
So I guess next Chapter is called "About what we did in Twilight's Castle" (or whatever you would like to call the Castle)
Well that really happened
So much hilarity in the end
Next stop: the Barn
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but thats closer to the house than the orchard meaning nope