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sneakpeak321
You know that one moment when you think of something awesome to write. Only to come in realization half ways done, it isn't such a great idea. Yea, I have a lot of those.
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I can't believe no one has commented on this yet! It's amazing! Also, I love Flutterdash
Nice Work!
Story has been good so far, tho there is some spelling mistakes but lets not care about those
This is definitely a very interesting and intriguing story.
As a FlutterDash fan, I definitely approve! If I can offer some critique, there are some misspellings around and some grammatical errors. I'd definitely suggest getting an editor, just to fix those little hiccups.
me encanta tu historia creo que eres un muy buen escritor
me encanta tu historia
me encanto pero también me sentí triste
esta historia me esta comiendo por dentro
tengo ansiedad por lo que traerá el próximo capitulo
me costo esperar para la cuarta parte
después de todo sigue así me encanta tu historia
I'm apologize to all the readers who were enjoying this story, but this story is now canceled.
5756124 why
5756438 It wasn't interesting to write anymore. So I came up with a better idea. I'm really sorry for disappointing you. If you like this story you will like my next one.
5758472 ok
me siento decepsionada.
pero esta bien
estoy segura que me encantara su nueva historia
aunque hubiera querido que siga esta
me encanta lo que haces sneakpeak321 y espero que sigas asi y no me canceles la nueva historia ggggg
5756124 then it should be marked as cancelled, not incomplete.
5789591
people has been requesting me to continue the story, so I am that why it incomplete sorry for the misunderstanding. Between me and you last chapter should be done in two weeks.
i like it and are you going to mark this story to complete now
5854563
Yes
5854567 ok
Can I just say, Wow! after reading this i'm still a little bit sobby, the last few paragraphs had me crying! this story is absolutely amazing so far! just the sheer passion that connects between the characters, I can almost feel myself at times balled up waiting to see what's going to happen, the tension was unreal this chapter! I loved it! amazing work man! keep it up! I really enjoyed the amount of love and tension this chapter! i really felt like it was alot more real than in previous chapters! I am hoping that other chapters will be like this one!
6120550
Thank you for the comment, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Okay so this story is really really good buuuuuuuuut your grammar is making it really hard to enjoy. The plot is pretty damn good and I would favorite this if I could but I can't due to the grammar. For now, you get a like because I'm a sucker for good plots....(get your mind out of the gutter). You should get somebody to look over your stories to pick out these tiny mistakes. It would make the story a lot more enjoyable.
Macky
Thanks for the late comment. Yea I knew about the grammar issue on this story, but I couldn't find a editor to fix my work. So sorry if you didn't enjoy this to it max, still thank for reading.