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Was going to do this at the halfway point in the story but...
So over all the story is well put together and balanced perfectly with how the characters interact. However I find that a lot of Octavia's interactions seem phoned in, this may be because it is still extremely early in the story but still doesn't seem great. Over all a very good and enticing story. Keep up the good work on it's sequel too I shall read it in a handful of days after I am finished with this and do my last review.
Wow Trixie how did you not see such an obvious trap?