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Hmmm I'm intrigued. I wonder if the group finally start to succeed in freeing the country or are thing going downhill from now on. Anyway the story so far is great. Maybe a bit too grim here and there for my personal taste. But I can understand why it has too be and I actually appreciate the writer to make me feel a bit horrified how ponies treated and how in RL us humans have done so in past or in some countries still are doing such acts of evil. It's really like watching a mirror world populated with equines instead of humanoids.
Working with a disenfranchised ethnic group is usually rough Twi, it may not go perfectly but good start. I'm also happy you didn't self medicate with booze after taking the city.
Since you don't know how to set up a weather system, maybe ask Sunbutt to send an expert to help out in organizing and teaching. I'm sure a certain rainbow maned pony would drop whatever she was doing to come here with the first shipments of supplies.
Also, Dreamhorse? What are you doing? Was that some kind of bad attempt at flirting or ... something else?
Finally, for your editing pleasure, try going to hemingwayapp.com. I've never really used it since my school gives free copies of Office, but some friends of mine swear by it
Twilight, you're a hornhead, yes. But also a mudpony and buzzard (I don't remember what you call pegasi) now, Alicorn. You get to experience all the tribalism here, lucky you.
Come to think of it, I can't wait until Equestria starts obviously supporting MLF. To be a fly on the wall when Celestia reveals she is considering the government in Neigh Orleans to be the official one to the noble sent to talk to her about what is going on. I'm frankly surprised this hasn't been seen as an act of war now that they know Princess Twilight is there. Twilight needs to share all the disparaging comments she overheard on the riverboat to Celestia so if they send the Duke's son again she can give him a lesson in tact.
6735165 I do sometimes suspect I'm overdoing the nastiness of these ponies. Still though, ain't gonna stop now!
6735189 You throw all these big words at me, which is fine if not a little awesome, but I'm just writing stuff with relatively little thought towards that beyond what I come up with at the moment.
The point is I'm doing all that stuff you say totally by accident. Not sure if good or bad thing
The main point I was here to make though is that the Duke has known that Twilight is there since at least the caverns and that she is in all likelihood supported by Celestia since purplesmart is her prized pupil and would hardly be there by accident. Previously he went crying to Celestia to fix the problems he couldn't fix himself, but what does he do when Celestia is the problem so to speak? I might eventually get around to giving you an answer.
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I do love me some big words. Mitigating, attribution, racial schema, ooh! Asymmetric insurgency operations.
I blame the army, they love big important sounding words. I can't help but think of things like this story in a "work" way. It's an interesting mental exercise, applying nationbuilding principles to a fantasy setting. I'm weird.
6736155 Great, now I have someone to tell me when I've made grievous errors concerning my civil warring pastel ponies and what they're up to when it comes to forming new governments. (My solution is to make things happen in the background and just assume they happened.)
Yeah, nation building doesn't make good fiction.
::looks down nose:: "The peasants like simple stories and not the complex interplay of great minds playing kingmaker. Now keep writing while I enjoy my hommus and tea."
Yeah, all that stuff is happening, but off screen as it's immaterial to the story you're telling.
Or magic, that will answer any complaints.
So something is happening to Luna and the M.L.I. has their first victory? Let us see where this goes.