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How does is that even possible? A cello is played standing up, which makes it rather hard to make look tiny. Unless if she was playing it in an entirely different fashion, in which case it'd look like a violin and Twilight wouldn't describe it as a tiny cello. It's a nitpick, I know, but if one of your main characters is going to be a cello player you should probably at least browse wikipedia quickly to learn a bit about it.
Was she explaining some secret the reader isn't supposed to know yet, or just saying 'we kill the rulers and leave'? If the former, good job that's excellent suspense building. If it's the latter, it goes completely against Twilight's personality. She's the type of pony to make a very detailed yet efficient plan at the least, or a horribly overcomplicated plan that is filled to the brim with wachy shenanigans at the worst. The latter is more like what Applejack or Rainbow Dash would do.
im sorry but this is the most ass backwards thing i have ever seen let me explain:
Celestia in all her infinite glory sends 4 untrained mares one of which can be easily traced to equestria to destabilise the government and bring freedom to the country instead of say a highly trained crack team of special forces soldiers( DONT LIE TO ME I KNOW SHE HAS THEM!!!) who can blend in with the populace and sow discontent stir up a bit of revolution and assasinate if needed
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My take on this was that it’s a low-priority project Celestia would like to see done, but is fully prepared to pull Twilight and company out and accept a loss for the time being. After all they’ve provided her with a means communicating/leaving in an emergency, and she probably assumes Twilight could fight her way out if need be.
Either that or she just keeps looking for something to teach Twilight how to handle failure but somehow Purple Smart keeps pulling something out of her tail-end at the last second every time.
I mean, if Twilight succeeds, Yay, maretonia is freed, venture well worth the attempt, region is introduced to a gross amount of instability and/or annexed into Equestria, etc. If she fails,, then they have more information than they started with which can be used to brief the crack team of commandos and bargaining chips politically. Either way, there’s a payoff. Worst case scenario Twilight gets captured and Celestia has an excuse to rain down hell on the ruling class to dig out a bona-fide Princess of Equestria.
"This you may recognise as the model Fleur De Lis. She is a native of Mareitania, from the region of Prance."
You misspelled recognize. Also, add "one" in between "This" and "you".
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I'm British, so I tend to use s in certain words rather than z which is more of an American thing. You'll see quite a bit of that.
I keep taking screenshots of snippets of conversations from this chapter because they're just so fantastic.
I'm sure I know people like this
It can.
That... is a good argument.